release-notes/devel/en_US Live.xml,1.16,1.17

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv30211

Modified Files:
	Live.xml 
Log Message:
Resync from wiki for editorial changes



Index: Live.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- Live.xml	7 Apr 2008 21:50:31 -0000	1.16
+++ Live.xml	8 Apr 2008 17:28:39 -0000	1.17
@@ -51,14 +51,6 @@
       drive, click on the <guilabel>Install to Hard Drive</guilabel>
       icon on the desktop.
     </para>
-
-    <note>
-      <title>No i586 Support</title>
-
-      <para>
-        The i686 Live images will not boot on an i586 machine.
-      </para>
-    </note>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-text-mode-installation">
@@ -105,24 +97,16 @@
       <title>Live USB Persistence</title>
 
       <para>
-        Work has continued to better integrate the Live images with the
-        rest of the system, and improve the tools used for building
-        them. The <command>livecd-creator</command> utility now also
-        provides an API for building alternative front-ends as well as
-        tools for other types of images.
+	Support for persistent changes with a Live image exists for
+        Fedora 9. The primary use case is booting from a Live image on
+        a USB flash drive and storing changes to that same device. To
+        do this, download the Live image and then run the following
+        command:
       </para>
-
+      <screen><![CDATA[livecd-iso-to-disk --overlay-size-mb 512 /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1]]></screen>
       <para>
-        The initial work to support persistent changes with a Live image
-        has also landed. The primary use case is booting from a Live
-        image on a USB flash drive and storing changes to that same
-        device. To do this, download the Live image and then run the
-        following command:
-      </para>
-<screen><![CDATA[livecd-iso-to-disk --overlay-size-mb 512 /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1]]></screen>
-      <para>
-        Replace <replaceable>/dev/sdb1</replaceable> with the partition
-        where you want to put the image.
+        Replace <replaceable>/dev/sdb1</replaceable> with the
+        partition where you want to put the image.
       </para>
 
       <para>
@@ -137,10 +121,14 @@
     </section>
     
     <section id="Tool-Changes">
-	    <title>Tool Changes</title>
-	    <para>
-		    Work has continued to better integrate the Live images with the rest of the system, and improve the tools used for building them. The <command>livecd-creator</command> utility now provides an API for building alternative front-ends, as well as tools for other types of images.
-	    </para>
+      <title>Tool Changes</title>
+      <para>
+	Work has continued to better integrate the Live images with
+	the rest of the system, and improve the tools used for
+	building them. The <command>livecd-creator</command> utility
+	now provides an API for building alternative front-ends, as
+	well as tools for other types of images.
+      </para>
     </section>
 
     <section id="sn-Differences-From-a-Regular-Fedora-Install">
@@ -159,12 +147,22 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-		  SSH is disabled by default. SSH is disabled because the default username in the Live images does not have any password; however, installation to hard disk prompts for creating a new username and password.
+	    SSH is disabled by default. SSH is disabled because the
+	    default username in the Live images does not have any
+	    password.  However, installation to hard disk prompts for
+	    creating a new username and password.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-		  Live image installations do not allow any package selection or upgrade capability since they copy the entire file system from media or USB disks, to the hard disk. After the installation is complete, and your system has been rebooted, packages can be added and removed as desired with <command>yum</command>, or the other software management tools.
+	    Live image installations do not allow any package
+	    selection or upgrade capability since they copy the entire
+	    file system from media or USB disks, to the hard
+	    disk. After the installation is complete, and your system
+	    has been rebooted, you can add and remove packages as
+	    desired with the <application>Add/Remove
+	    Packages</application> tool, <command>yum</command>, or
+	    the other software management tools.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>