translation-quick-start-guide/en_US Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml, 1.11, 1.12 Translating_Documentation.xml, 1.8, 1.9 Translating_Software.xml, 1.12, 1.13
Noriko Mizumoto (noriko)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Apr 18 05:10:05 UTC 2008
Author: noriko
Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11985
Modified Files:
Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml Translating_Documentation.xml
Translating_Software.xml
Log Message:
bit and pieces of typos and corrections made via self-proofreading.
Index: Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml 16 Apr 2008 06:40:06 -0000 1.11
+++ Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml 18 Apr 2008 05:09:56 -0000 1.12
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- This public key (~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub) will be used for your &FED; account creation described in Section 2.4.
+ This public key (~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub) will be used for your &FED; account creation described in <xref linkend="sn-apply-account"/>.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- This GPG key ID will be used for your &FED; account creation described in Section 2.4.
+ This GPG key ID will be used for your &FED; account creation described in <xref linkend="sn-apply-account"/>.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
@@ -178,12 +178,12 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- In the Edit Account (user_name) page, enter your GPG key ID in <guilabel>GPG Key ID:</guilabel> field. For pubic SSH key, click <guilabel>Browse...</guilabel> located next to <guilabel>Public SSH Key:</guilabel> and specify your public SSH key.
+ In the Edit Account (user_name) page, enter your GPG key ID in <guilabel>GPG Key ID:</guilabel> field. For pubic SSH key, click <guilabel>Browse...</guilabel> button located next to <guilabel>Public SSH Key:</guilabel> field and specify your public SSH key.
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>
- <guilabel>Telephone Number</guilabel> and <guilabel>Postal Address</guilabel> fields, they are required to fill in when signing the CLA. These information is not accessible to others except admin groups. Please refer to Fedora Privacy Policy at <ulink url=" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Legal/PrivacyPolicy"/>.
+ <guilabel>Telephone Number</guilabel> and <guilabel>Postal Address</guilabel> fields are also required to fill in for signing the CLA. These information is NOT accessible by others except admin groups. Please refer to Fedora Privacy Policy at <ulink url=" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Legal/PrivacyPolicy"/>.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- If the information of telephone number and postal address have not been provided yet, the Edit Account (user_name) page will be appeared. Otherwise &FED; Contributor License Agreement page will be displayed. Read through the agreement carefully and click <guibutton>I agree</buibutton> if you are happy to do so. If not, click <guibutton>I do not agree</guibutton>.
+ If the information of telephone number and postal address have not been provided yet, the Edit Account (user_name) page will be appeared. Otherwise &FED; Contributor License Agreement page will be displayed. Read through the agreement carefully and click <guibutton>I agree</guibutton> if you are happy to do so.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
<procedure>
<step>
<para>
- In the user-view page, click <guilabel>Apply For a new Group</guilabel> located in the left sdie bar. If you like to do this step sometime later, your user-view page can be reached at <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/view/user_name/">.
+ In the user-view page, click <guilabel>Apply For a new Group</guilabel> located in the left sdie bar. If you like to do this step sometime later, your user-view page can be reached at <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/view/user_name"/>.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- An administrator is notified of your application, and offers to sponsor you. This may take between an hour and a few days.
+ An administrator is notified of your application, and offers to sponsor you. This may take between an hour and a few days. The membership notification will be emailed to you once sponsored.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
Index: Translating_Documentation.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Translating_Documentation.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- Translating_Documentation.xml 18 Apr 2008 03:44:19 -0000 1.8
+++ Translating_Documentation.xml 18 Apr 2008 05:09:56 -0000 1.9
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
<para>
Press 'a' to modify and add your language code. Once added, save it and exit the editor.
</para>
- <para><emphasis>keeping the list in alphabetical order.</emphasis>
+ <para><emphasis>Please remember to keep the list in alphabetical order.</emphasis>
</para>
</step>
<step>
Index: Translating_Software.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Translating_Software.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- Translating_Software.xml 17 Apr 2008 04:57:37 -0000 1.12
+++ Translating_Software.xml 18 Apr 2008 05:09:56 -0000 1.13
@@ -49,15 +49,14 @@
<para>
To work on another module later, make a directory with the module
name under the parent directory such as <filename
- class="directory">system-config-printer</filename>.
+ class="directory">~/myproject/system-config-printer/</filename>.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sn-obtain-translate-modules">
<title>Obtaining and Translating Modules</title>
<para>
- Now that you have prepared a directory structure, you can download
- a file to translate.
+ Now that you have prepared a directory structure, you can download a file to translate. You may need to communicate with other translators in your language team to avoid confliction. If you are not sure, please contact your language coordinator.
</para>
<procedure>
<step>
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@
</para>
-->
<para>
- Visit your language page such as <ulink url="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/"/>, and select a target release. The interface will redirect you to a page for that release, such as <ulink url="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9/"/>.
+ Visit your language page such as <ulink url="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/"/>, and select a target release. The interface will redirect you to a page for that release, such as <ulink url="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9"/>.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -86,7 +85,7 @@
</para>
-->
<para>
- Scroll down the page to find the table of all modules available for that release. Use the green download icon next to each module to download the po file to the directory you created in the previous section.
+ Scroll down the page to find the table of all modules available for that release. Use the green download icon next to each module to download the po file to the directory you created in the previous section.
</para>
</step>
<step>
@@ -254,7 +253,7 @@
<step>
<para>
Convert the <filename class="extension">.po</filename> file to
- a <filename class="extension">.mo</filename> file using <command>msgfmt</command> with <option>-o</option>:
+ a <filename class="extension">.mo</filename> file using <command>msgfmt</command> with <option>-o</option> option:
</para>
<screen><command>msgfmt -o system-config-printer.mo <replaceable>ja</replaceable>.po</command></screen>
@@ -264,10 +263,12 @@
<para>
As a root user, overwrite the existing <filename
class="extension">.mo</filename> file in
- <filename>/usr/share/locale/<replaceable>lang</replaceable>/LC_MESSAGES/</filename>.
+ <filename>/usr/share/locale/<replaceable>lang</replaceable>/LC_MESSAGES/</filename>.
+ </para>
+ <para>
First, back up the existing file:
</para>
- <screen><command>su</command></screen>
+ <screen><command>su-</command></screen>
<screen><command>cp /usr/share/locale/<replaceable>ja</replaceable>/LC_MESSAGES/<replaceable>system-config-printer</replaceable>.mo <replaceable>system-config-printer</replaceable>.mo-backup</command></screen>
<para>
Now move the file converted for proofreading.
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