desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US Desktops.xml, 1.2, 1.3 desktop-user-guide.xml, 1.8, 1.9 Media.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Tour-KDE.xml, 1.2, 1.3 Tour-Xfce.xml, 1.2, 1.3 Web.xml, 1.4, 1.5
Marc Wiriadisastra (mwiriadi)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Jun 1 08:25:51 UTC 2008
Author: mwiriadi
Update of /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13789
Modified Files:
Desktops.xml desktop-user-guide.xml Media.xml Tour-KDE.xml
Tour-Xfce.xml Web.xml
Log Message:
Some modifications
Index: Desktops.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Desktops.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Desktops.xml 18 May 2008 15:01:09 -0000 1.2
+++ Desktops.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.3
@@ -25,13 +25,14 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- GNOME, which focuses on simplicity
+
+<para> GNOME, which focuses on simplicity </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- KDE, which includes a large collection of applications and customization features
+ <para>KDE, which includes a large collection of applications and customization features </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- Xfce, which is appropriate for older PCs and laptops due to its low-memory requirements
+ <para>Xfce, which is appropriate for older PCs and laptops due to its low-memory requirements </para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<tip>
@@ -39,7 +40,7 @@
<para>
Fedora's extensive repository of software offers other desktops as well.
To learn how to browse and install software from the repository, refer to
- the chapter<xref linkend="ch-Pirut" />.
+ the chapter<xref linkend="ch-Pirut" />
</para>
</tip>
<para>
@@ -75,4 +76,4 @@
mode: xml
fill-column: 72
End:
--->
+-->
\ No newline at end of file
Index: desktop-user-guide.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/desktop-user-guide.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- desktop-user-guide.xml 18 May 2008 15:10:19 -0000 1.8
+++ desktop-user-guide.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.9
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
xpointer="element(ch-Introduction)"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-<!--Desktops-->
+<!-- Desktops -->
<xi:include href="./Desktops.xml"
xpointer="element(ch-FedoraDesktops)"
@@ -114,7 +114,6 @@
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
</book>
-
<!--
Local variables:
mode: xml
Index: Media.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Media.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Media.xml 18 May 2008 14:50:11 -0000 1.4
+++ Media.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.5
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
<para>
Both GNOME and KDE do not have <application>K3b</application>
installed by default. To install using <application>Pirut</application>,
- refer to the chapter <xref linkend="ch-Pirut"/>.
+ refer to the chapter <xref linkend="ch-Pirut" />.
With <application>Pirut</application> running, go through the
menu Browse (tab) <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
<guisubmenu>Sound and Video</guisubmenu></menuchoice>, then click the
@@ -157,17 +157,17 @@
<informaltable>
<tbody>
<row><entry><imagedata fileref="../figs/k3baudiocd.png" /></entry>
- <entry>To create a new audio CD Project</entry>
+ <entry><para>To create a new audio CD Project</para></entry>
</row>
<row><entry><imagedata fileref="../figs/k3bdatacd.png" /></entry>
- <entry>To create a New Data CD Project</entry>
+ <entry><para>To create a New Data CD Project</para></entry>
</row>
<row><entry><imagedata fileref="../figs/k3bdatadvd.png" /></entry>
- <entry>To create a New Data DVD Project</entry>
+ <entry><para>To create a New Data DVD Project</para></entry>
</row>
<row><entry><imagedata fileref="../figs/k3bcopycd.png" /></entry>
- <entry>To Copy a CD</entry>
- </row>
+ <entry><para>To Copy a CD</para></entry>
+ </row>
</tbody>
</informaltable>
<note><para>
Index: Tour-KDE.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Tour-KDE.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Tour-KDE.xml 18 May 2008 15:16:27 -0000 1.2
+++ Tour-KDE.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.3
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0"?>
+<?xml version="1.0"?>
<!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
In addition to the menus, the menu panel contains a number of
icons for common software.
</para>
- <table id="tb-tour-icons">
+ <table id="tb-KDE-tour-icons">
<title>Some Desktop Icons</title>
<tgroup cols="2">
<colspec colnum="1" colname="Icon"/>
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
</section>
<section id="sn-kde-window-list">
<title>The Window List Panel</title>
- <figure id="figs-window-list">
+ <figure id="figs-KDE-window-list">
<title>Fedora Window List</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
Index: Tour-Xfce.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Tour-Xfce.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Tour-Xfce.xml 18 May 2008 15:16:27 -0000 1.2
+++ Tour-Xfce.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.3
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0"?>
+<?xml version="1.0"?>
<!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
Upon the initial login into Fedora, you will see default desktop
shown here:
</para>
- <figure id="figs-fedora-desktop">
+ <figure id="figs-Xfce-fedora-desktop">
<title>Default Fedora Desktop</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
</section>
<section id="sn-Xfce-menu-panel">
<title>The Menu Panel</title>
- <figure id="figs-menu-panel">
+ <figure id="figs-xfce-menu-panel">
<title>Gnome Menu Panel</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
In addition to the menus, the menu panel contains a number of
icons for common software.
</para>
- <table id="tb-tour-icons">
+ <table id="tb-Xfce-tour-icons">
<title>Some Desktop Icons</title>
<tgroup cols="2">
<colspec colnum="1" colname="Icon"/>
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
</section>
<section id="sn-Xfce-window-list">
<title>The Window List Panel</title>
- <figure id="figs-window-list">
+ <figure id="figs-Xfce-window-list">
<title>Fedora Window List</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
Index: Web.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Web.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Web.xml 18 May 2008 13:39:59 -0000 1.4
+++ Web.xml 1 Jun 2008 08:25:49 -0000 1.5
@@ -25,13 +25,13 @@
<section id="sn-using-firefox">
<title>Using Firefox</title>
- <title>GNOME</title>
+ <subtitle>GNOME</subtitle>
<para>
To start <application>Firefox</application> in GNOME, select <guimenu>Applications
> Internet > Firefox Web Browser</guimenu> or use the menu panel icon:
</para>
<imagedata fileref="../figs/firefoxicon.png" />
- <title>KDE</title>
+ <subtitle>KDE</subtitle>
<para>
To start <application>Firefox</application> in KDE, select
<menuchoice>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
<section id="sn-using-konqueror">
<title>Using Konqueror</title>
- <title>GNOME</title>
+ <subtitle>GNOME</subtitle>
<para>
To start <application>Konqueror</application> in GNOME, select
<menuchoice>
@@ -120,7 +120,8 @@
<guimenuitem>Konqueror</guimenuitem></menuchoice>:
</para>
<imagedata fileref="../figs/konqueror.png" format="PNG"/>
- <title>KDE</title>
+
+ <subtitle>KDE</subtitle>
<para>
To start <application>Konqueror</application> in KDE, select
<menuchoice>
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