desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US Login.xml,1.1,1.2

[Marc Wiriadisastra (mwiriadi)]

Author: mwiriadi

Update of /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv10133

Modified Files:
	Login.xml 
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Modifying sections




Index: Login.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US/Login.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- Login.xml	13 Mar 2008 12:47:34 -0000	1.1
+++ Login.xml	13 Mar 2008 22:07:57 -0000	1.2
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
 <chapter id="ch-Login">
   <title>Logging into the Desktop</title>
   <para>
-    This section of the Fedora Desktop User Guide explains how to login
-    to your system. The <emphasis>user account</emphasis> and the
-    password created during the installation process is necessary to
-    complete this step. If you have forgotten your user account, your
+    This section of the Fedora Desktop User Guide explains how to identify yourself,
+    or <emphasis>login</emphasis>,to your system. During the post installation
+    process, you created an identity with a username and password, called an
+    <emphasis>account</emphasis>. If you have forgotten your user account, your
     password, or both, read <xref linkend="sn-cannot-login"/>. For
     additional information about the login process, read
     <xref linkend="sn-login-explanation"/>. This first section covers