desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US Login.xml, 1.5, 1.6 Media.xml, 1.6, 1.7 Office.xml, 1.7, 1.8

Marc Wiriadisastra (mwiriadi) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Mar 16 13:10:54 UTC 2008


Author: mwiriadi

Update of /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19340

Modified Files:
	Login.xml Media.xml Office.xml 
Log Message:
Fixed xml problems so should not error




Index: Login.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US/Login.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- Login.xml	14 Mar 2008 13:48:46 -0000	1.5
+++ Login.xml	16 Mar 2008 13:10:51 -0000	1.6
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
     </para>
   </tip>
   <para>
-    Next the <firsterm>desktop environment</firstterm> is loaded. In some desktop 
+    Next the <firstterm>desktop environment</firstterm> is loaded. In some desktop 
     environments, a small box containing a logo and icons, called a splash 
     screen, may temporarily appear. Any <firstterm>splash</firstterm> screen is 
     then replaced by the default Fedora desktop.
@@ -99,6 +99,7 @@
       <firstterm>root</firstterm> password when they start, so you need 
       not login as <firstterm>root</firstterm> to use them.
     </para>
+  </warning>
   </section>
   
   <section id="sn-cannot-login">


Index: Media.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US/Media.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- Media.xml	16 Mar 2008 12:43:51 -0000	1.6
+++ Media.xml	16 Mar 2008 13:10:51 -0000	1.7
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
       All of the contents of your volume are displayed in the window. 
       Files on the volume can be opened with a double-click; further 
       actions can be performed by right-clicking the file to gain 
-      access to the <firstterm>context</firstterm> menu.
+      access to the <guimenu>context</guimenu> menu.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-writing-media">
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
     <para>
       Both GNOME and KDE do not have <application>K3b</application> 
       installed by default. To install using <application>Pirut</application>, 
-      refer to the chapter <xref linkend"Managing Software With Pirut" />. 
+      refer to the chapter <xref linkend="ch-managing-software-with-pirut"/>. 
       With <application>Pirut</application> running, go through the 
       menu Browse (tab) <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
       <guisubmenu>Sound and Video</guisubmenu></menuchoice>, then click the 
@@ -185,6 +185,7 @@
   select the .iso image, then click the <guibutton>Start</guibutton> button.
   </para>
   </section>
+  
   <section id="sn-gnomebaker">
   <title>Using GnomeBaker in Gnome</title>
   <para>
@@ -205,7 +206,7 @@
   When installed <application>GnomeBaker</application> is found under 
   <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu> 
   <guisubmenu>Sound and Video</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>CD/DVD Writer</guimenuitem>
-  </menuchoice>
+  </menuchoice></para>
   <para><imagedata fileref="../figs/gnomebaker-32.png" /></para>
   <para>
   In <application>GnomeBaker</application> there are three primary 
@@ -224,7 +225,7 @@
   <row><entry><imagedata fileref="../figs/gnomebaker-audio-cd.png" />
   </entry>
   <entry><para><guibutton>Audio CD</guibutton> Use this to create an 
-  audio CD.<para></entry></row>
+  audio CD.</para></entry></row>
   </tbody>
   </informaltable>
   
@@ -238,15 +239,17 @@
   to burn the files or folders to the disc.
   </para>
   </listitem>
-  <listitem>
-  <para>
+  <listitem><para>
   Burning an ISO image file such as the Fedora 8 DVD installation image 
-  is done through the <guimenu>Tools > Burn DVD Image</guimenu> menu. 
+  is done through the <menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu> 
+  <guimenuitem>Burn DVD Image</guimenuitem></menuchoice> menu. 
   If the <code>.iso</code> file is for a CD, choose 
   <guimenu>Burn CD Image</guimenu>. Navigate to the image, select it, 
   and click the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button, clicking the 
   <guibutton>Start</guibutton> button in the next window.
   </para>
+  </listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 


Index: Office.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/devel/en_US/Office.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- Office.xml	16 Mar 2008 12:43:51 -0000	1.7
+++ Office.xml	16 Mar 2008 13:10:51 -0000	1.8
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   <application>Pirut</application>. Using <application>Pirut</application> 
   is covered in the chapter <xref linkend="ch-manage-pirut"/> To install 
   the office productivity tools, go to <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> 
-  in the left menu of <application>Pirut</appication> and in the right 
+  in the left menu of <application>Pirut</application> and in the right 
   menu select the <guimenuitem>Office/Productivity group</guimenuitem>, 
   clicking the <guibutton>Optional packages</guibutton>. Install the 
   <application>OpenOffice.org</application> suite of packages. 




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