install-guide/devel/en_US nextsteps.xml,1.10,1.11

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue May 13 04:49:43 UTC 2008


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3917

Modified Files:
	nextsteps.xml 
Log Message:
Bugfixes



Index: nextsteps.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/nextsteps.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- nextsteps.xml	16 Oct 2007 06:52:05 -0000	1.10
+++ nextsteps.xml	13 May 2008 04:49:41 -0000	1.11
@@ -23,23 +23,22 @@
     <title>Updating Your System</title>
 
     <para>
-      The &FP; releases updated software packages for &FC; throughout
-      the support period of each version. Updated packages add new
-      features, improve reliability, resolve bugs, or remove security
-      vulnerabilities. To ensure the security of your system, update
-      regularly, and as soon as possible after a security announcement
-      is issued. Refer to
-      <xref linkend="sn-news-subscriptions"/> for information on the
-      &FED; announcements services.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      A new update applet, called <application>puplet</application>,
-      reminds you of updates when they are available.  The
-      <application>puplet</application> applet is installed by default
-      in &FC;.  It checks for software updates from all configured
-      repositories, and runs as a background service.  It generates a
-      notification message on the desktop if updates are found, and you
-      can click the message to update your system's software.
+      The &PROJECT; releases updated software packages for &DISTRO;
+      throughout the support period of each version. Updated packages
+      add new features, improve reliability, resolve bugs, or remove
+      security vulnerabilities. To ensure the security of your system,
+      update regularly, and as soon as possible after a security
+      announcement is issued. Refer to <xref
+      linkend="sn-news-subscriptions"/> for information on the &DISTRO;
+      announcements services.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      An update applet reminds you of updates when they are available.
+      This applet is installed by default in &DISTRO;.  It checks for
+      software updates from all configured repositories, and runs as a
+      background service.  It generates a notification message on the
+      desktop if updates are found, and you can click the message to
+      update your system's software.
     </para>
     <para>
       To update your system with the latest packages manually, use the
@@ -50,9 +49,11 @@
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
-          <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Software
-          Updater</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
+	  Choose <menuchoice>
+	  <guimenu>System</guimenu>
+	  <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
+	  <guimenuitem>Update Software</guimenuitem>
+	  </menuchoice>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -63,9 +64,8 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Review the list of updated packages. The package list displays
-          a double arrow next to any updates that require a system
-          reboot to take effect.
+          To review the list of updated packages, select
+          <guilabel>Review updates</guilabel>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 
       <para>
         Ensure that your system has an active network connection before
-        you run the <application>Software Updater</application>, or the
+        you run the <application>Update Software</application> tool, or the
         <command>yum</command> utility. The update process downloads
         information and packages from a network of servers.
       </para>
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Join"/>
+      <ulink url="http://join.fedoraproject.org/"/>
     </para>
   </section>
 </chapter>




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