desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US Introduction.xml,1.2,1.3

[Marc Wiriadisastra (mwiriadi)]

Author: mwiriadi

Update of /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv7733

Modified Files:
	Introduction.xml 
Log Message:
-Modified sections of it.
-Need a heap more modifications since it seems it hasn't been updated
all.




Index: Introduction.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/desktop-user-guide/F-8/en_US/Introduction.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Introduction.xml	18 May 2008 12:09:10 -0000	1.2
+++ Introduction.xml	18 May 2008 12:19:02 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0"?>
+<?xml version="1.0"?>
 
 <!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
 
@@ -14,47 +14,52 @@
   <para>
     Welcome to the Fedora Core 8 Desktop User Guide! This guide is
     intended for users, with a working Fedora Core 8 system, who are
-    able to use a mouse and keyboard. This guide shows:
+    able to use a mouse and keyboard. This guide explains:
   </para>
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>
+        The different desktops available to the Fedora user
+      </para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
         How to login to your computer
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        The layout of the default Fedora desktop
+        The layout of the three main Fedora desktops (GNOME, KDE and Xfce)
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to use Nautilus, a file and system navigator
+        How to use the file and system navigator
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to use Evolution, an e-mail client
+        How to use the e-mail client
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to use Gaim, an instant messenger client
+        How to use the instant messenger client
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to use Firefox, a web-browser
+        How to use the web-browser
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to use OpenOffice, an office suite
+        How to use the OpenOffice and Koffice office suite
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        How to customize your new Fedora desktop
+        How to customize your new Fedora desktop 
       </para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>