en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml

[Paul W. Frields]

 en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml |   16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit a32d532c714e2195aac4fe4781bc6278d3351da4
Author: Paul W. Frields <paul at salma.internal.frields.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 19:34:35 2008 -0400

    Sync with wiki content

diff --git a/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml b/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
index 1d613dc..bbaac39 100644
--- a/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
+++ b/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <para>This support follows on the improvements to the UVC driver
       first introduced in Fedora 9 that added support for any webcam
       with a Windows Vista compliant logo.  Fedora 10 features a new
-      v4l2 version of <package>gspca</package>, a USB webcam driver
+      V4L2 version of <package>gspca</package>, a USB webcam driver
       framework with support for many different USB webcam bridges and
       sensors.</para>
     <para>Userspace support for webcams has also been improved by adding
@@ -20,15 +20,15 @@
 	class="library">libv4l</systemitem>.  This support makes these
       applications understand the manufacturer specific and custom video
       formats emitted by many webcams, especially by many of the webcams
-      supported by <package></package>gspca.</para>
+      supported by <package>gspca</package>.</para>
     <para>For a list of all webcams and applications where Fedora 10's
-      new webcam support has been tested refer to the <ulink
+      new webcam support has been tested refer to <ulink
 	url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/BetterWebcamSupport"/>. 
       For a list of all cams supported by the original version of
-      <package></package>gspca refer to the original gspca
+      <package>gspca</package> refer to the original gspca
       website.</para>
     <para><ulink url="http://mxhaard.free.fr/spca5xx.html"/></para>
-    <para>The v4l2 version of <package>gspca</package> in Fedora 10
+    <para>The V4L2 version of <package>gspca</package> in Fedora 10
       supports all these webcams and more.</para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-Plymouth_graphical_boot">
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   <section id="sn-Infrared_remote_support">
     <title>Infrared remote support</title>
     <para>New to Fedora 10 is the <package>gnome-lirc-properties</package>
-      package with a new graphical front-end for configuring LIRC to use
+      package with a new graphical frontend for configuring LIRC to use
       with applications supporting the protocol.  For more information
       refer to <xref linkend="sn-Infrared_remote_support"/>.</para>
     <para>LIRC is routinely used in multimedia applications to implement
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
 	<application>Empathy</application> instant messenger is the new
 	default replacing <application>Pidgin</application> in this
 	release. It has support for multiple protocols including IRC,
-	XMPP(Jabber), Yahoo, MSN, and others via plugins. It also
+	XMPP (Jabber), Yahoo, MSN, and others via plugins. It also
 	supports video and voice in the XMPP protocol, with support for
 	other protocols under active development. Empathy uses the
 	<command>telepathy</command> framework that has a number of
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
       and 9). The <systemitem
 	class="daemon">gnome-keyring-daemon</systemitem> facility saves
       passwords for these encryption technologies. If you wish to try
-      <command>knetworkmanager</command> can be
+      <command>knetworkmanager</command>, it can be
       installed from the repository.</para>
     <para>As the native <application>KWin</application> window manager
       now optionally supports compositing and desktop effects, the KDE