2 commits - en_US/Colophon.xml en_US/Virtualization.xml

[Karsten Wade]

 en_US/Colophon.xml       |   23 ++++++-----------------
 en_US/Virtualization.xml |   21 ++++++++++++++-------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 8affe24e714c9710f582aa7498140939f436af2c
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 16:22:27 2008 -0800

    Sync'd from wiki updates; small list formatting changes not on wiki.

diff --git a/en_US/Virtualization.xml b/en_US/Virtualization.xml
index a661fa6..191700f 100644
--- a/en_US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en_US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -159,16 +159,15 @@
 	<para> Utilities in the new <package>virt-mem</package> package
 	  provide access to process tables, interface information,
 	  dmesg, and uname of QEmu and KVM guests from the host system.
+	  For more information, refer to
 	  <ulink
-	    url="http://et.redhat.com/~rjones/virt-mem/"/>
+	    url="http://et.redhat.com/~rjones/virt-mem/"/>.
 	</para>
+	<note>
+	  <title>The <package>virt-mem</package> package is experimental.</title>
+	  <para>Only 32-bit guests are supported at this time.</para>
+	</note>
       </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    <note>
-      <title><command>virt-mem</command> is experimental.</title>
-      <para>Only 32 bit guests are supported at this time.</para>
-    </note>
-    <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para> The new <command>virt-df</command> tool provides
 	  information on the disk usage of guests from the host system.
@@ -176,6 +175,14 @@
 	    url="http://et.redhat.com/~rjones/virt-df"/>
 	</para>
       </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>The new experimental <package>xenwatch</package> package
+	  provides utilities for interacting with
+	  <command>xenstore</command> on Xen-based virtualization hosts.
+	  For more information refer to
+	  <xref
+	    linkend="http://kraxel.fedorapeople.org/xenwatch/"/></para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist><para />
     <section id="sn-libvirt_updated_to_0.4.6">
       <title><package>libvirt</package> updated to 0.4.6</title>


commit c71561f878f8b58c24772f27b7f664536c021c10
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Nov 6 15:18:10 2008 -0800

    Updating so the "content" can be translated, but ignore the names.
    
    * Ignore names; these need updating before RC
    ** https://fedorahosted.org/release-notes/ticket/34
    * Small fixes to make clearer
    * Did not reorder lines hoping to make subsequent retrans of this easier.

diff --git a/en_US/Colophon.xml b/en_US/Colophon.xml
index a8e74ac..e55129b 100644
--- a/en_US/Colophon.xml
+++ b/en_US/Colophon.xml
@@ -11,21 +11,9 @@
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> explains tools and production methods.</para>
     </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist><para />
+  </itemizedlist>
   <section id="sn-Contributors">
     <title>Contributors</title>
-    <note>
-      <title>This content not updated until after Preview Release
-	occurs.</title> 
-      <para>We need to finish writing and translating the notes to know
-	who has worked on them.</para>
-    </note>
-    <note>
-      <title>Out of date content.</title>
-      <para>
-	This content is out of date, it has not been updated since the
-	Fedora 9 release notes.</para>
-    </note>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
@@ -317,14 +305,15 @@
   </section><section id="sn-Production_methods">
     <title>Production methods</title>
     <para>Beat writers produce the release notes directly on the Fedora
-      Project Wiki.  They collaborate with other subject matter experts
-      during the test release phase of Fedora to explain important
+      Project wiki.  They collaborate with other subject matter experts
+      from Fedora to explain important
       changes and enhancements.  The editorial team ensures consistency
       and quality of the finished beats, and ports the Wiki material to
-      DocBook XML in a revision control repository.  At this point, the
+      DocBook XML in a revision control repository.  Next, the
       team of translators produces other language versions of the
-      release notes, and then they become available to the general
+      release notes, which are made available to the general
       public as part of Fedora.  The publication team also makes them,
       and subsequent errata, available via the Web.</para>
+    <para><ulink url="hjttp://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes"/></para>
   </section>
 </section>