2 commits - en-US/Security.xml en-US/SystemDaemons.xml

Paul W. Frields pfrields at fedoraproject.org
Thu Apr 2 23:30:25 UTC 2009


 en-US/Security.xml      |    2 +-
 en-US/SystemDaemons.xml |   12 +++++++-----
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 4161f815689c9ea3ecfc6e6deed6cb2b5b536314
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 19:30:10 2009 -0400

    Fix GNOME to acronym in Security beat

diff --git a/en-US/Security.xml b/en-US/Security.xml
index 787fef8..be1a510 100644
--- a/en-US/Security.xml
+++ b/en-US/Security.xml
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     <title>Fingerprint Readers</title>
     <para>
       Fingerprint readers are now better integrated with Fedora
-      11. Gnome users can easily setup fingerprint authentication
+      11. GNOME users can easily setup fingerprint authentication
       using <package>gnome-about-me</package>, and will allow the
       ability to login from both <package>gdm</package> and
       <package>gnome-screensaver</package>.


commit 77fdfb5eb8b9259fc2c6e5c3eb419aa639f89620
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 19:29:48 2009 -0400

    Fix tagging in System Daemons beat

diff --git a/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml b/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
index f705822..0192ac7 100644
--- a/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
+++ b/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>
-		Provide 2 new systemtap scripts to monitor disk and
+		Provide two new systemtap scripts to monitor disk and
 		network activity of running applications
 	      </para>
 	    </listitem>
@@ -40,7 +40,8 @@
 		<itemizedlist>
 		  <listitem>
 		    <para>
-		      relatime option for root filesystem / 
+		      relatime option for root filesystem <systemitem
+		      class="filesystem">/</systemitem>
 		    </para>
 		  </listitem>
 		  <listitem>
@@ -75,9 +76,10 @@
 	<para>	  
 	  <package>mdadm</package> has been updated to 3.0. The
 	  significant change which justifies the new major version
-	  number is that mdadm can now handle metadata updates
-	  entirely in userspace.  This allows mdadm to support
-	  metadata formats that the kernel knows nothing about.
+	  number is that <package>mdadm</package> can now handle
+	  metadata updates entirely in userspace.  This allows
+	  <package>mdadm</package> to support metadata formats that
+	  the kernel knows nothing about.
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	  Currently two such metadata formats are supported:





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