2 commits - en-US/Installer.xml

Jared Smith jsmith at fedoraproject.org
Fri Apr 3 01:23:53 UTC 2009


 en-US/Installer.xml |  243 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 file changed, 151 insertions(+), 92 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit cd5ead28f4010369fcd7e75797de84a3da06552c
Author: Jared K. Smith <jsmith at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 18:12:01 2009 -0700

    Minor changes based on comments from stickster

diff --git a/en-US/Installer.xml b/en-US/Installer.xml
index 4087efb..b94053d 100644
--- a/en-US/Installer.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installer.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   </note>
   <application>Anaconda</application>is the name of the Fedora
   installer. This section outlines issues related to 
-  <application>anaconda</application>and installing Fedora 11.</para>
+  <application>Anaconda</application>and installing Fedora 11.</para>
   <section>
     <title>Installation in text mode</title>
     <para>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
       <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>). If your
       system has a graphical display, but graphical installation fails,
       try booting with the 
-      <command>xdriver=vesa</command>option (see "Chapter 9. Boot
+      <option>xdriver=vesa</option>option (see "Chapter 9. Boot
       Options" in the 
       <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>) or with the 
       <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>option
@@ -98,19 +98,19 @@
       the same way that they were in previous versions. However,
       because package selection, advanced partitioning, and bootloader
       configuration are now automated in text mode, 
-      <application>anaconda</application>cannot prompt you for
+      <application>Anaconda</application>cannot prompt you for
       information that it requires during these steps. You must
       therefore ensure that the kickstart file includes the packaging,
       partitioning, and bootloader configurations. If any of this
       information is missing, 
-      <application>anaconda</application>will exit with an error
+      <application>Anaconda</application>will exit with an error
       message.</para>
     </section>
   </section>
   <section>
     <title>Upgrade Notes</title>
     <para>Upgrading from Fedora 9 directly to Fedora 11 using 
-    <application>yum</application>is not possible, you must upgrade to
+    <command>yum</command>is not possible, you must upgrade to
     Fedora 10 first, then upgrade to Fedora 11. See 
     <ulink type="http"
     url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq">
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
     information. You can also use 
     <application>preupgrade</application>to upgrade directly to Fedora
     11 using 
-    <application>anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime
+    <application>Anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime
     by downloading the packages in advance.</para>
     <para>Some modified configuration files will be replaced by their
     original versions during the upgrade. Your modified versions of
@@ -131,13 +131,13 @@
     option: 
     <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>. This
     option boots the system with the generic vesa driver (using the 
-    <command>xdriver=vesa</command>boot option) and allows you to use
+    <option>xdriver=vesa</option>boot option) and allows you to use
     Fedora's graphical installation mode even when 
     <application>anaconda</application>cannot load the correct driver
     for your video card.</para>
   </section>
   <section>
-    <title>boot.iso now works on systems with UEFI</title>
+    <title>boot.iso Now Works on Systems With UEFI</title>
     <para>The Fedora installation CDs and DVD provide you with an image
     file, 
     <filename>boot.iso</filename>that you can burn to a CD and use to


commit 84bbc1e4573825c4a02600cbbee6093365602dd8
Author: Jared K. Smith <jsmith at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 17:40:21 2009 -0700

    Formatting changes, plus updated the path to the beat in the remark

diff --git a/en-US/Installer.xml b/en-US/Installer.xml
index 2cb9fd5..4087efb 100644
--- a/en-US/Installer.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installer.xml
@@ -1,95 +1,154 @@
 <?xml version='1.0'?>
-<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
+    "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd"
+[
 ]>
-
 <section>
-        <title>Installation Notes</title>
-        <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/BackwardsCompatibility</ulink></remark>
-	<para>
-		<note>
-			<para>
-				To learn how to install Fedora, refer to <ulink type="http" url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/">http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/</ulink>. If you encounter a problem or have a question during installation that is not covered in these release notes, refer to <ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink> and <ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common</ulink>.
-			</para>
-		</note>
-		<application>Anaconda</application> is the name of the Fedora installer. This section outlines issues related to <application>anaconda</application> and installing Fedora 11. 
-	</para>
-	<section>
-		<title>Installation in text mode</title>
-		<para>
-			<note>
-				<para>
-					We recommend that you use the graphical installer to install Fedora on your computer wherever possible. If you are installing Fedora on a system that lacks a graphical display, consider performing the installation over a VNC connection (see "Chapter 12. Installing Through VNC" in the <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>). If your system has a graphical display, but graphical installation fails, try booting with the <command>xdriver=vesa</command> option (see "Chapter 9. Boot Options" in the <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>) or with the <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel> option when booting from the Fedora 11 Distro DVD.
-				</para>
-			</note>
-			The text-mode installation option in Fedora 11 is significantly more streamlined than it was in earlier versions. Text-mode installation now omits the more complicated steps that were previously part of the process, and provides you with an uncluttered and straightforward experience.
-		</para>
-		<para>
-			These steps are now automated in text mode: 
-			<variablelist>
-				<varlistentry>
-					<term>
-						Package selection
-					</term>
-					<listitem>
-						<para>
-							<application>Anaconda</application> now automatically selects packages only from the base and core groups. These packages are sufficient to ensure that the system is operational at the end of the installation process, ready to install updates and new packages. 
-						</para>
-				      </listitem>
-				</varlistentry>
-				<varlistentry>
-					<term>
-						Advanced partitioning
-					</term>
-					<listitem>
-						<para>
-							<application>Anaconda</application> still presents you with the initial screen from previous versions that allows you to specify where <application>Anaconda</application> should install Fedora on your system. You can choose to use a whole drive, to remove existing Linux partitions, or to use the free space on the drive. However, <application>anaconda</application> now automatically sets the layout of the partitions and does not ask you to add or delete partitions or file systems from this basic layout. If you require a customized layout at installation time, you should perform a graphical installation over a VNC connection or a kickstart installation. More advanced options yet, such as LVM, encrypted filesystems, and resizable filesystems are still only available only in graphical mode and kickstart. 
-						</para>
-					</listitem>
-				</varlistentry>
-					<varlistentry>
-						<term>
-							Bootloader configuration
-						</term>
-					<listitem>
-						<para>
-							<application>Anaconda</application> now performs bootloader configuration automatically. 
-						</para>
-					</listitem>
-				</varlistentry>
-			</variablelist>
-		</para>
-		<section>
-			<title>Kickstart installations in text mode</title>
-			<para>
-				Text-mode installations using kickstart are carried out in the same way that they were in previous versions. However, because package selection, advanced partitioning, and bootloader configuration are now automated in text mode, <application>anaconda</application> cannot prompt you for information that it requires during these steps. You must therefore ensure that the kickstart file includes the packaging, partitioning, and bootloader configurations. If any of this information is missing, <application>anaconda</application> will exit with an error message.
-			</para>
-		</section>
-	</section>
-	<section>
-		<title>Upgrade Notes</title>
-		<para>
-			Upgrading from Fedora 9 directly to Fedora 11 using <application>yum</application> is not possible, you must upgrade to Fedora 10 first, then upgrade to Fedora 11. See <ulink type="http" url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq</ulink> for more information. You can also use <application>preupgrade</application> to upgrade directly to Fedora 11 using <application>anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime by downloading the packages in advance. 
-		</para>
-		<para>
-			Some modified configuration files will be replaced by their original versions during the upgrade. Your modified versions of these configuration files will be saved as <filename>*.rpmsave</filename> files in that case. 
-		</para>
-	</section>
-	<section>
-	<title>Boot menu</title>
-		<para>
-			The boot menu for the Fedora Distro DVD includes a new
-			option: <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>. This
-			option boots the system with the generic vesa driver
-			(using the <command>xdriver=vesa</command> boot option)
-			and allows you to use Fedora's graphical installation mode
-			even when <application>anaconda</application> cannot load the correct driver for your
-			video card.
-		</para>
-	</section>
-	<section>
-	<title>boot.iso now works on systems with UEFI</title>
-		<para>
-			The Fedora installation CDs and DVD provide you with an image file, <filename>boot.iso</filename> that you can burn to a CD and use to boot a system and start the installation process. Typically, you would do this prior to installing Fedora from a local hard drive or from a location on a network. You can now use the CD produced from the <filename>boot.iso</filename> image to start installation on a system that uses Unified Extensible Firmware Interface (UEFI). CDs produced from older versions of <filename>boot.iso</filename> only worked with systems that used Basic Input Output System (BIOS). 
-		</para>
-	</section>
- </section>
+  <title>Installation Notes</title>
+  <remark>This beat is located here: 
+  <ulink type="http"
+  url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Installer">
+  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Installer</ulink></remark>
+  <para>
+  <note>
+    <para>To learn how to install Fedora, refer to 
+    <ulink type="http"
+    url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/">
+    http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/</ulink>. If you
+    encounter a problem or have a question during installation that is
+    not covered in these release notes, refer to 
+    <ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ">
+    http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink>and 
+    <ulink type="http"
+    url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common">
+    http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common</ulink>.</para>
+  </note>
+  <application>Anaconda</application>is the name of the Fedora
+  installer. This section outlines issues related to 
+  <application>anaconda</application>and installing Fedora 11.</para>
+  <section>
+    <title>Installation in text mode</title>
+    <para>
+    <note>
+      <para>We recommend that you use the graphical installer to
+      install Fedora on your computer wherever possible. If you are
+      installing Fedora on a system that lacks a graphical display,
+      consider performing the installation over a VNC connection (see
+      "Chapter 12. Installing Through VNC" in the 
+      <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>). If your
+      system has a graphical display, but graphical installation fails,
+      try booting with the 
+      <command>xdriver=vesa</command>option (see "Chapter 9. Boot
+      Options" in the 
+      <citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>) or with the 
+      <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>option
+      when booting from the Fedora 11 Distro DVD.</para>
+    </note>The text-mode installation option in Fedora 11 is
+    significantly more streamlined than it was in earlier versions.
+    Text-mode installation now omits the more complicated steps that
+    were previously part of the process, and provides you with an
+    uncluttered and straightforward experience.</para>
+    <para>These steps are now automated in text mode: 
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>Package selection</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+          <application>Anaconda</application>now automatically selects
+          packages only from the base and core groups. These packages
+          are sufficient to ensure that the system is operational at
+          the end of the installation process, ready to install updates
+          and new packages.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>Advanced partitioning</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+          <application>Anaconda</application>still presents you with
+          the initial screen from previous versions that allows you to
+          specify where 
+          <application>Anaconda</application>should install Fedora on
+          your system. You can choose to use a whole drive, to remove
+          existing Linux partitions, or to use the free space on the
+          drive. However, 
+          <application>anaconda</application>now automatically sets the
+          layout of the partitions and does not ask you to add or
+          delete partitions or file systems from this basic layout. If
+          you require a customized layout at installation time, you
+          should perform a graphical installation over a VNC connection
+          or a kickstart installation. More advanced options yet, such
+          as LVM, encrypted filesystems, and resizable filesystems are
+          still only available only in graphical mode and
+          kickstart.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>Bootloader configuration</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+          <application>Anaconda</application>now performs bootloader
+          configuration automatically.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist></para>
+    <section>
+      <title>Kickstart installations in text mode</title>
+      <para>Text-mode installations using kickstart are carried out in
+      the same way that they were in previous versions. However,
+      because package selection, advanced partitioning, and bootloader
+      configuration are now automated in text mode, 
+      <application>anaconda</application>cannot prompt you for
+      information that it requires during these steps. You must
+      therefore ensure that the kickstart file includes the packaging,
+      partitioning, and bootloader configurations. If any of this
+      information is missing, 
+      <application>anaconda</application>will exit with an error
+      message.</para>
+    </section>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>Upgrade Notes</title>
+    <para>Upgrading from Fedora 9 directly to Fedora 11 using 
+    <application>yum</application>is not possible, you must upgrade to
+    Fedora 10 first, then upgrade to Fedora 11. See 
+    <ulink type="http"
+    url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq">
+    http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq</ulink>for more
+    information. You can also use 
+    <application>preupgrade</application>to upgrade directly to Fedora
+    11 using 
+    <application>anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime
+    by downloading the packages in advance.</para>
+    <para>Some modified configuration files will be replaced by their
+    original versions during the upgrade. Your modified versions of
+    these configuration files will be saved as 
+    <filename>*.rpmsave</filename>files in that case.</para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>Boot menu</title>
+    <para>The boot menu for the Fedora Distro DVD includes a new
+    option: 
+    <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>. This
+    option boots the system with the generic vesa driver (using the 
+    <command>xdriver=vesa</command>boot option) and allows you to use
+    Fedora's graphical installation mode even when 
+    <application>anaconda</application>cannot load the correct driver
+    for your video card.</para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>boot.iso now works on systems with UEFI</title>
+    <para>The Fedora installation CDs and DVD provide you with an image
+    file, 
+    <filename>boot.iso</filename>that you can burn to a CD and use to
+    boot a system and start the installation process. Typically, you
+    would do this prior to installing Fedora from a local hard drive or
+    from a location on a network. You can now use the CD produced from
+    the 
+    <filename>boot.iso</filename>image to start installation on a
+    system that uses Unified Extensible Firmware Interface (UEFI). CDs
+    produced from older versions of 
+    <filename>boot.iso</filename>only worked with systems that used
+    Basic Input Output System (BIOS).</para>
+  </section>
+</section>





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