5 commits - en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml en-US/Kernel.xml

Paul W. Frields pfrields at fedoraproject.org
Fri Apr 3 02:39:59 UTC 2009


 en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml |   31 ++++++++++++++++++++++---------
 en-US/Kernel.xml         |   10 +++++-----
 2 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 3d5194f77bf3a9240ad734aad89b947888b0ce30
Merge: 33d2096... ca09ebd...
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 22:39:48 2009 -0400

    Merge branch 'master' of ssh://git.fedorahosted.org/git/docs/release-notes



commit 33d2096e951e40bd12508241e498beecd2ad9d16
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 22:38:59 2009 -0400

    Respect the blind, "refer to"

diff --git a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
index ac511d8..58105d9 100644
--- a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
+++ b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     for the AVR and related parts as well as for the Microchip PIC. In
     addition, there are packages to support development on older, less
     popular parts such as the Z80, 8051, and others. For a more
-    complete description see <ulink type="http"
+    complete description refer to <ulink type="http"
     url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packages_For_Embedded_Development">Packages
     for embedded development on the wiki</ulink> .
   </para>


commit 1c0d8a8f2957eb09504397f5de9c7ddd89470dd2
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 22:38:07 2009 -0400

    Remove a typo from Embedded

diff --git a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
index a3e4035..ac511d8 100644
--- a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
+++ b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
   </para>
   <para>
     Fedora 11 includes version 5.1 of
-    <package>dfu-programmer</package>package>, a command-line
-    programmer for Atmel (8051 & AVR) chips with a USB bootloader
-    supporting ISP. A command line option was added to support the
-    AVR32 trampoline. All known Atmel USB AVR/8051/AVR32 devices are
-    now supported.
+    <package>dfu-programmer</package>, a command-line programmer for
+    Atmel (8051 & AVR) chips with a USB bootloader supporting
+    ISP. A command line option was added to support the AVR32
+    trampoline. All known Atmel USB AVR/8051/AVR32 devices are now
+    supported.
   </para>
 </section>


commit 2a7fd4d6b39f0ec0d1f63f5ef8522c7305521154
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 22:36:38 2009 -0400

    Formatting Embedded beat, ugly diff, sorry

diff --git a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
index a53c3a4..a3e4035 100644
--- a/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
+++ b/en-US/Devel-Embedded.xml
@@ -3,12 +3,25 @@
 ]>
 
 <section>
-        <title>Embedded Development</title>
-        <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Embedded_Development_Beat">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Embedded_Development_Beat</ulink></remark>
-        <para>
-		Fedora 11 includes a range of packages to support development of embedded applications on various targets. There is broad support for the AVR and related parts as well as for the Microchip PIC. In addition, there are packages to support development on older, less popular parts such as the Z80, 8051, and others. For a more complete description see  <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packages_For_Embedded_Development">Packages for embedded development on the wiki</ulink> . 
-	</para>
-	<para>
-		Fedora 11 includes version 5.1 of <package>dfu-programmer</package>package>, a command-line programmer for Atmel (8051 & AVR) chips with a USB bootloader supporting ISP. A command line option was added to support the AVR32 trampoline. All known Atmel USB AVR/8051/AVR32 devices are now supported. 
-	</para>
-    </section>
+  <title>Embedded Development</title>
+  <remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http"
+  url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Embedded_Development_Beat">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Embedded_Development_Beat</ulink></remark>
+  <para>
+    Fedora 11 includes a range of packages to support development of
+    embedded applications on various targets. There is broad support
+    for the AVR and related parts as well as for the Microchip PIC. In
+    addition, there are packages to support development on older, less
+    popular parts such as the Z80, 8051, and others. For a more
+    complete description see <ulink type="http"
+    url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packages_For_Embedded_Development">Packages
+    for embedded development on the wiki</ulink> .
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    Fedora 11 includes version 5.1 of
+    <package>dfu-programmer</package>package>, a command-line
+    programmer for Atmel (8051 & AVR) chips with a USB bootloader
+    supporting ISP. A command line option was added to support the
+    AVR32 trampoline. All known Atmel USB AVR/8051/AVR32 devices are
+    now supported.
+  </para>
+</section>


commit 0c279b65d2b66f770ba7fdfb50d9c3240ad569b4
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 22:28:01 2009 -0400

    Tear out old section, in sync with wiki.

diff --git a/en-US/Kernel.xml b/en-US/Kernel.xml
index 7c469c8..cb9dba9 100644
--- a/en-US/Kernel.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kernel.xml
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
     package and run the following command against it:</para>
 
     <screen>
-      <command>rpm -qpl kernel-<version>.src.rpm</command>
+<command>rpm -qpl kernel-<version>.src.rpm</command>
     </screen>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-Changelog">
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
     following command:</para>
 
     <screen>
-      <command>rpm -q --changelog kernel-<version></command>
+<command>rpm -q --changelog kernel-<version></command>
     </screen>
 
     <para>If you need a user friendly version of the changelog, refer
@@ -82,6 +82,7 @@
     <para>Customizations made for the Fedora version are available
     from <ulink url="http://cvs.fedoraproject.org"/>.</para>
   </section>
+  <!--
   <section id="sn-Kernel_Flavors">
     <title>Kernel Flavors</title>
 
@@ -144,15 +145,14 @@
       kernel.</para>
     </note>
   </section>
+  -->
   <section id="sn-Preparing_for_Kernel_Development">
     <title>Preparing for Kernel Development</title>
     
     <para>Fedora 11 does not include the
     <package>kernel-source</package> package provided by older
     versions since only the <package>kernel-devel</package> package is
-    required now to build external modules. Configured sources are
-    available, as described in <xref
-    linkend="sn-Kernel_Flavors"/>.</para>
+    required now to build external modules.</para>
 
     <important>
       <title>Custom Kernel Building</title>





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