en-US/Virtualization.xml
John J. McDonough
jjmcd at fedoraproject.org
Thu Apr 30 20:20:39 UTC 2009
en-US/Virtualization.xml | 57 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
1 file changed, 28 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 05d498be09446bdcf8bb125f364a89a1f6029401
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Apr 30 16:20:07 2009 -0400
Correct numerous typos in Virtualization
diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
index e1c49c8..f237a3a 100644
--- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<para>
For further details refer to the <ulink type="http"
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/VirtVNCAuth">Virtualization
- VNC Authentication</ulink> wiki page
+ VNC Authentication</ulink> wiki page.
</para>
</section>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
<para>
For further details refer to the
<ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/VirtImprovedConsole">Improved
- Graphical Console for Virtual Guests</ulink> wiki page
+ Graphical Console for Virtual Guests</ulink> wiki page.
</para>
</section>
@@ -111,27 +111,26 @@
<para>
Fedora 11 includes a merge of the <package>qemu</package> and
<package>kvm</package> RPMs. The <package>kvm</package> package
- is now obsoleted by <ulink type="http"
- url="http://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/name/qemu-kvm">pngqemu-kvm.</ulink>
- The merging of the two code bases continues upstream, but the
- Fedora package maintainers have chosen to merge the packages now
- in order reduce the maintenance burden and provide better
- support.
+ is now obsoleted by <code>qemu-system-x86</code> subpackage of
+ <package>qemu</package>. The merging of the two code bases
+ continues upstream, but the Fedora package maintainers have
+ chosen to merge the packages now in order reduce the maintenance
+ burden and provide better support.
</para>
<para>
For further details refer to the <ulink type="http"
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/KVM_and_QEMU_merge">KVM
- and QEMU merge</ulink> wiki page
+ and QEMU merge</ulink> wiki page.
</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>SVirt Mandatory Access Control</title>
+ <title>sVirt Mandatory Access Control</title>
<para>
Fedora 11 integrates SELinux's Mandatory Access Control with
- Virtualization. Virtual machines can now be much more effectively
+ virtualization. Virtual machines can now be much more effectively
isolated from the host and one another, giving the increased
assurance that security flaws cannot be exploited by malicious
guests.
@@ -139,7 +138,7 @@
<para>
For further details refer to the <ulink type="http"
- url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/SVirt_Mandatory_Access_Control">SVirt
+ url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/SVirt_Mandatory_Access_Control">sVirt
Mandatory Access Control</ulink> wiki page.
</para>
</section>
@@ -352,7 +351,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- new APIs for Node device detach reattach and reset
+ New APIs for node device detach reattach and reset
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -367,7 +366,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- allow QEmu domains to survive daemon restart
+ allow QEMU domains to survive daemon restart
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -382,7 +381,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- support of storage cache control options for QEmu/KVM
+ support of storage cache control options for QEMU/KVM
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -392,12 +391,12 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Test driver infrastructure
+ test driver infrastructure
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- parallelism in the daemon and associated config
+ parallelism in the daemon and associated configuration
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -417,7 +416,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- QEmu SDL graphics
+ QEMU SDL graphics
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -432,7 +431,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- QEmu pid file and XML states for daemon restart
+ QEMU pid file and XML states for daemon restart
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -482,7 +481,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- improve QEmu/KVM tun/tap performances
+ improve QEMU/KVM tun/tap performances
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -492,12 +491,12 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- support VNC password settings for QEmu/KVM
+ support VNC password settings for QEMU/KVM
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- qemu driver version reporting
+ QEMU driver version reporting
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -530,19 +529,19 @@
<listitem>
<para>
Option to remove storage when deleting a virtual
- machine.
+ machine
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
File browser for libvirt storage pools and volumes, for
- use when attaching storage to a new or existing guest.
+ use when attaching storage to a new or existing guest
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
Physical device assignment (PCI, USB) for existing
- virtual machines.
+ virtual machines
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -613,7 +612,7 @@
New <command>virt-clone</command> option
<option>--original-xml</option>, allows cloning a
guest from an XML file, rather than require an
- existing, defined guest.
+ existing, defined guest
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -621,14 +620,14 @@
New <command>virt-install</command> option
<option>--import</option>, allows creating a guest
from an existing disk image, bypassing any OS install
- phase.
+ phase
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
New <command>virt-install</command> option
<option>--host-device</option>, for connecting a
- physical host device to the guest.
+ physical host device to the guest
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -660,7 +659,7 @@
<para>
Enhanced URL install support: Debian Xen paravirt,
Ubuntu kernel and <filename>boot.iso</filename>,
- Mandriva kernel, and Solaris Xen Paravirt
+ Mandriva kernel, and Solaris Xen paravirt
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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