en-US/SystemDaemons.xml

John J. McDonough jjmcd at fedoraproject.org
Thu Apr 30 21:54:25 UTC 2009


 en-US/SystemDaemons.xml |   29 ++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit a3c488877a855e169c1142c87c0b3971be6b3ace
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 30 17:53:59 2009 -0400

    Minor typos in System Daemons

diff --git a/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml b/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
index ebe62d6..f116483 100644
--- a/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
+++ b/en-US/SystemDaemons.xml
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@
 		<itemizedlist>
 		  <listitem>
 		    <para>
-		      relatime option for root filesystem <systemitem
-		      class="filesystem">/</systemitem>
+		      relatime option for root <systemitem
+		      class="filesystem">file system</systemitem>
 		    </para>
 		  </listitem>
 		  <listitem>
@@ -66,18 +66,17 @@
 	  </itemizedlist>
 	  Users of Fedora 11 should therefore see a reduction in power
 	  usage of their system.
-	  <variablelist>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term>pm-utils</term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  The pm-utils power management utilities have been
-		  updated to 1.2.4. Some improvements have been made
-		  in logging and configuration.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	  </variablelist>
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term>pm-utils</term>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>
+	  The pm-utils power management utilities have been
+	  updated to 1.2.4. Some improvements have been made
+	  in logging and configuration.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -98,7 +97,7 @@
 	  <itemizedlist>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>
-		DDF  - The SNIA standard format
+		DDF  - The SNIA standard format.
 	      </para>
 	    </listitem>
 	    <listitem>





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