en-US/Kickstart2.xml

[Rüdiger Landmann]

 en-US/Kickstart2.xml |   10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 3c054f69173bdc1a5cf86ffbb9f05281a45cc02e
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Jul 17 10:07:22 2009 +1000

    Further refinement for BZ#510173

diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart2.xml b/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
index 51e1d6a..e12d327 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart2.xml
@@ -1393,10 +1393,10 @@ logvol / --vgname=myvg --size=2000 --name=rootvol
 		The static method requires that you enter all the required networking information in the kickstart file. As the name implies, this information is static and is used during and after the installation. The line for static networking is more complex, as you must include all network configuration information on one line. You must specify the IP address, netmask, gateway, and nameserver.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-		In the following example, the "\" indicates that you should read the example as one continuous line, although its presentation on this page has broken it. Note that you cannot use the "\" in a real kickstart file, and must include all this information on a single line with no break.
+		Note that although the presentation of this example on this page has broken the line, in a real kickstart file, you must include all this information on a single line with no break.
 	</para>
 <screen>network --bootproto=static --ip=10.0.2.15 --netmask=255.255.255.0 \
---gateway=10.0.2.254 --nameserver=10.0.2.1
+ --gateway=10.0.2.254 --nameserver=10.0.2.1
 </screen>
 	<para>
 		If you use the static method, be aware of the following two restrictions:
@@ -1413,11 +1413,11 @@ logvol / --vgname=myvg --size=2000 --name=rootvol
 
 					<para>You can also configure multiple nameservers here. To do so, specify them as a comma-delimited list in the command line.</para>
 					<para>
-						In the following example, the "\" indicates that you should read the example as one continuous line, although its presentation on this page has broken it. Note that you cannot use the "\" in a real kickstart file, and must include all this information on a single line with no break.
+						Note that although the presentation of this example on this page has broken the line, in a real kickstart file, you must include all this information on a single line with no break.
 					</para>
 					
-<screen>network --bootproto=static --ip=10.0.2.15 --netmask=255.255.255.0 \
---gateway=10.0.2.254 --nameserver 192.168.2.1,192.168.3.1
+<screen>network --bootproto=static --ip=10.0.2.15 --netmask=255.255.255.0
+ --gateway=10.0.2.254 --nameserver 192.168.2.1,192.168.3.1
 </screen>					
 <!--	BZ#255901, above replaces below, can specify multiple nameservers		<para>
 	You can only specify one nameserver here. However, you can use the kickstart file's <command>%post</command> section (described in <xref linkend="s1-kickstart2-postinstallconfig"/>) to add more name servers, if needed.