en-US/Installation_Guide.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Fri Mar 27 13:09:19 UTC 2009


 en-US/Installation_Guide.xml |    8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit d532d12199b7da7e5256e758a938f5831ff3feaf
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Mar 27 23:09:13 2009 +1000

    Correct XML error

diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Guide.xml b/en-US/Installation_Guide.xml
index 85b0f6f..19aaa66 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Guide.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Guide.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						hardware considerations.
+						hardware considerations, and hardware details that you may need during installation.
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 				<listitem>
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 	<title>Advanced installation options</title>
 	<partintro>
 			<para>
-				This part of the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Guide</citetitle> covers more complex and unusual methods of installing Fedora, including:
+				This part of the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Guide</citetitle> covers more complex and uncommon methods of installing Fedora, including:
 			</para>
 			<itemizedlist>
 				<listitem>
@@ -89,9 +89,10 @@
 		<xi:include href="Ksconfig.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 	</part>
 	<part id="pt-After_installation">
+	<title>After installation</title>
 	<partintro>
 			<para>
-				This part of the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Guide</citetitle> covers finalizing the installaton, as well as some installation-related tasks that you might perform at some time in the future. These include:
+				This part of the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Guide</citetitle> covers finalizing the installation, as well as some installation-related tasks that you might perform at some time in the future. These include:
 			</para>
 			<itemizedlist>
 				<listitem>
@@ -111,7 +112,6 @@
 				</listitem>
 			</itemizedlist>
 	</partintro>
-	<title>After installation</title>
 		<xi:include href="firstboot.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 		<xi:include href="nextsteps.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> 
 		<xi:include href="Rescue_Mode.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>





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