en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml

[Rüdiger Landmann]

 en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml    |    2 +-
 en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml |   14 ++++++++------
 en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml |   10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 3a666157cdab6b1a3f79aa39fe16065facce0743
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Mar 31 21:13:01 2009 +1000

    Clarify example mounting CD image for HTTP install per RHEL BZ#486812

diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml
index b76a3c3..e192ad9 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_note_1.xml
@@ -6,6 +6,6 @@
 	<title>Note</title>
 
 	<para>
-		In the following examples, the directory on the installation staging server that will contain the installation files will be specified as <filename><replaceable>/location/of/disk/space</replaceable></filename>. The directory that will be made publicly available via FTP, NFS, or HTTP will be specified as <replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable>. For example, <filename><replaceable>/location/of/disk/space</replaceable></filename> may be a directory you create called <filename>/var/isos</filename>. <filename><replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable></filename> might be <filename>/var/www/html/f&PRODVER;</filename>, for an HTTP install.
+		In the following examples, the directory on the installation staging server that will contain the installation files will be specified as <filename><replaceable>/location/of/disk/space</replaceable></filename>. The directory that will be made publicly available via FTP, NFS, or HTTP will be specified as <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable>. For example, <filename><replaceable>/location/of/disk/space</replaceable></filename> may be a directory you create called <filename>/var/isos</filename>. <filename><replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable></filename> might be <filename>/var/www/html/f&PRODVER;</filename>, for an HTTP install.
 	</para>
 </note>
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diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml
index 5d1daa0..d34b6f2 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@
 			
 			<para>
 				<command>
-					mount -o loop <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable>/
+					mount -o loop <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable>/
 				</command>
 			</para>
 			
 			<para>
-				In this case <replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable> will be a directory that is shared via FTP or HTTP.
+				In this case <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> will be a directory that is shared via FTP or HTTP.
 			</para>
 			
 		</listitem>
@@ -34,23 +34,25 @@
 			
 			<para>
 				<command>
-					mount -o loop <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>disk<replaceable>X</replaceable>.iso <replaceable>/export/directory/</replaceable>disk<replaceable>X</replaceable>/
+					mount -o loop <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>disk<replaceable>X</replaceable>.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>disk<replaceable>X</replaceable>/
 				</command>
 			</para>
 			
 			<para>
-				Do the above for each of the CDROM iso images, for example:
+				Again, <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> will be a directory that is shared via FTP or HTTP. Do the above for each of the CDROM iso images, for example:
 			</para>
-			
+			<example>
+			<title>Making a Fedora installation CD available on a HTTP server</title>
 			<para>
 				<command>
 					mount -o loop /var/isos/Fedora-&PRODVER;-i386-disk1.iso /var/www/html/f&PRODVER;-install/disk1/
 				</command>
 			</para>
+			</example>
 		</listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
 	
 	<para>
-		Next make sure that the <filename><replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable></filename> directory is shared via FTP or HTTP, and verify client access. You can check to see whether the directory is accessible from the server itself, and then from another machine on the same subnet that you will be installing to.
+		Next make sure that the <filename><replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable></filename> directory is shared via FTP or HTTP, and verify client access. You can check to see whether the directory is accessible from the server itself, and then from another machine on the same subnet that you will be installing to.
 	</para>
 </section>
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diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
index 8ea3da7..d24e160 100644
--- a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_2.xml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 			
 			<para>
 				<command>
-					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/export/directory/</replaceable>
+					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
 				</command>
 			</para>
 		</listitem>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 			
 			<para>
 				<command>
-					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;-disk*.iso <replaceable>/export/directory/</replaceable>
+					mv <replaceable>/location/of/disk/space/</replaceable>f&PRODVER;-disk*.iso <replaceable>/publicly/available/directory/</replaceable>
 				</command>
 			</para>
 		</listitem>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 	</para> -->
 		
 	<para>
-		Ensure that the <filename><replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable></filename> directory is exported via NFS via an entry in <filename>/etc/exports</filename>. 
+		Ensure that the <filename><replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable></filename> directory is exported via NFS via an entry in <filename>/etc/exports</filename>. 
 	</para>
 		
 	<para>
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 	
 	<para>
 		<command>
-			<replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable> client.ip.address(ro,no_root_squash)
+			<replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> <replaceable>client.ip.address</replaceable>(ro,no_root_squash)
 		</command>
 	</para>
 		
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 	
 	<para>
 		<command>
-			<replaceable>/export/directory</replaceable> *(ro,no_root_squash)
+			<replaceable>/publicly/available/directory</replaceable> *(ro,no_root_squash)
 		</command>
 	</para>