Branch 'f12' - en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml

[Rüdiger Landmann]

 en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml |   22 +++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit d9a03db3fcc24a30548dbc5d8081154496bfa85a
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 13:35:34 2009 +1000

    More markup for Devel-Eclipse

diff --git a/en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml b/en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml
index e5b171b..2c367dc 100644
--- a/en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml
+++ b/en-US/Devel-Eclipse.xml
@@ -7,26 +7,22 @@
 	<remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Development_Eclipse_Beat">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Development_Eclipse_Beat</ulink></remark>
 
 	<para>
-	  Eclipse has had a major update to version 3.5
-	  (Galileo). Users should read the 
-	  <ulink type="http" url=
-		 "http://update.eclipse.org/downloads/drops/R-3.5-200906111540/eclipse-news-all.html">
-	  Eclipse New & Noteworthy</ulink>
-	  page to see the release notes for this version.
+	  <application>Eclipse</application> has had a major update to version 3.5
+	  (Galileo). Users should read the <citetitle>Eclipse New & Noteworthy</citetitle> page available at <ulink type="http" url="http://update.eclipse.org/downloads/drops/R-3.5-200906111540/eclipse-news-all.html"></ulink> to see the release notes for this version.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-	  Fedora now includes more Eclipse plug-ins than ever before
+	  Fedora now includes more <application>Eclipse</application> plug-ins than ever before
 	  with the new inclusion of Doxygen Integration
-	  (eclipse-eclox), the Remote System Explorer (eclipse-rse)
-	  and a Verilog/VHDL Editor (eclipse-veditor).
+	  (<package>eclipse-eclox</package>), the Remote System Explorer (<package>eclipse-rse</package>)
+	  and a Verilog/VHDL Editor (<package>eclipse-veditor</package>).
 	</para>
 	<para>
-	  Other major changes in Eclipse plug-ins include the Data
+	  Other major changes in <application>Eclipse</application> plug-ins include the Data
 	  Tools Platform now contains the full database development
-	  IDE (eclipse-dtp), the Dynamic Language Toolkit now includes
-	  Remote System Explorer integration (eclipse-dltk-rse) and
+	  IDE (<package>eclipse-dtp</package>), the Dynamic Language Toolkit now includes
+	  Remote System Explorer integration (<package>eclipse-dltk-rse</package>) and
 	  the Eclipse Modelling Framework SDO component was obsoleted
-	  and removed (eclipse-emf-sdo).
+	  and removed (<package>eclipse-emf-sdo</package>).
 	</para>
 </section>