draft notice text

[Mark Johnson]

Brock Organ wrote:
> On Wed, 2004-09-15 at 16:52 -0400, Tammy Fox wrote:
> 
>>I was about to add the common draft notice file from bug #132415, but I
>>wanted to discuss the wording of the notice a bit more. (This was
>>discussed on the Hardening Doc Preview thread, but I am starting a new
>>one with a more appropriate subject.)
>>
> 
> 
>>Thoughts?
> 
> 
> sounds good to me ...

Me, too. A nice improvement:)

 > Then, in the parent file, the entity &BUG-NUM; would a link to the
 > Bugzilla entry for that document.

We may not want the &BUG-NUM; entity to show the full URL if it's 
one of those horrendously long, page-wrapping bugzilla URLs. If 
that's indeed the case, we may want the entity to contain a complete 
ulink element with link text that is literally the bugzilla bug 
number. ('just thinking out loud here...)

Cheers,
Mark


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