Security Guide, Chapters 1-3 ready for review and editing

[Eric Christensen]

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Adam,
Opps...  I did a quick look and thought I had finished it.  Thanks for
making the changes.  I think Keith has them right now so we can all go
over them again tomorrow and make sure they are how they should be.

I appreciate your help!

Eric



Adam D. Ligas wrote:
| Hey Eric,
|
| I took a quick flip through the docs and they look/read well.
|
| One thing I found a bit confusing was in Chapter 3.  You go over each
| partition and give a little info as why you handle it the way you do.
| At the end of the paragraph is an italics word or phrase.
|
| I figured out that the word or phrase is the reasoning behind your
| selection/handling, but it was a little confusing.  I'm not sure if
| those are author notes, or if they are meant to be in the finished
| document.
|
| Under the assumption that you wanted them in the finished document, I
| went ahead and took a whack at including them in a way I thought was
| more clear.  Also, the /tmp partition section doesn't have a "reasoning"
| so someone would need to add one there.
|
| To the best of my knowledge I did everything as one change, so you
| should be able to revert easily if I overstepped any bounds.
|
| - Adam
|
|
|
| On Tue, 2008-04-29 at 15:42 -0400, Eric H Christensen wrote:
|> I think Chapters 1-3 in the Security Guide [1] are ready for review
and editing.  Chapter 4 is getting close to being ready and Chapter 4.1
[2] is already over on the final side.  As soon as I get a little more
time I hope to have Chapter 4 ready for review (later tonight?).
|>
|> If someone can take a look at what I have I'd appreciate it greatly!
  Trying to get this ready before F9.
|>
|> Eric
|>
|>
|> [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/CryptoGuide
|> [2] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Security_Guide/9/LUKSDiskEncryption
|>
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