Overview rewrite

[Paul W. Frields]

On Mon, 2007-12-31 at 17:40 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> John Babich wrote:
> 
> > Rahul:
> > 
> > I copied what you did and performed a fairly large rewrite - the
> > result of being an obsessive-compulsive word-hacker.
> > 
> > It's at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JohnBabich/Overview.
> > 
> > Use whatever you like.
> 
> I have taken it with some minor adjustments. Thanks.

I would really like this page to read more easily for project newcomers,
at whom it's aimed.  That includes first-time Linux users, press, and so
forth.  Does anyone mind if I take a stab at that?

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