Docs help requested for Feature Page Summary

[John Poelstra]

Hi Docs People,

I'm wondering of there are any people who would be willing to do their 
word-smithing magic on the text for this page: 
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/11/FeatureList

This page gets a lot of exposure and is read by a lot of different 
audiences, including the media. I'd like to make sure it is 
understandable and reads as well as it can.  The summary that 
accompanies each feature name is particularly important. For the most 
part the summary comes directly from the individual feature page.

Thanks,
John