Need Second pair of eyes & have a question

[Mani A]

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Kirk  wrote:
> If anyone has the time could you proof these two pages  that are for the
> F10 User Guide.  I've looked at them so much I'm blind, but I
> think they're finished.
>
> https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=User:Kirk202/User_Guide_-_Communications&action=edit


Some Points:

1. 'Fedora can be used to send electronic mail and communicate in real
time with people around the world
'  sounds a bit trivial. People using the user guide may not know
about 'email clients' or about accessing their mails from the web and
mail clients from different locations.

2. There was a mistake in the Kmail table: 'Check Mail in' does not
send email. Modified a few other things in the table

3. KwalletManager is not mentioned at all.


Best

A. Mani


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A. Mani
Member, Cal. Math. Soc


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