web/html/About/Projects docs.php,1.2,1.3 index.php,1.1,1.2

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/fedora/web/html/About/Projects
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv29105/html/About/Projects

Modified Files:
	docs.php index.php 
Log Message:
I did a fair job of going over each page and checking each link; tried to fix as many problems as I could, with an emphasis on no-errors and error-free content.  I fixed the side navigation to be have links to modern content; updated links; one redirect, more to come?; grammar and technical edits; misc and more.  Let's tag this live tomorrow, Tue. 6 December 2005 15:00 UTC or thereabouts, and I'll be around all day to fix any problems that come up.


Index: docs.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/About/Projects/docs.php,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- docs.php	1 Dec 2005 01:18:28 -0000	1.2
+++ docs.php	6 Dec 2005 06:53:02 -0000	1.3
@@ -65,11 +65,11 @@
 		<li>Emacs with PSGML mode (optional, but recommended)</li>
 		</ul>
 
-        <p><b>HOWEVER</b>, the project will take submissions of new
-        documentation in any format, as there are volunteers who will
+        <p><strong>HOWEVER</strong>, the project takes submissions of new
+        documentation in any format, as there are volunteers who can
         convert into DocBook/XML.  Ongoing maintenance for the new
-        document should happen in DocBook/XML, which will be much
-        easier to learn from the converted document.</p>
+        document should happen in DocBook/XML, which is easier to learn 
+        from the converted document.</p>
 
         <p>The Documentation Project is not interested in unmaintained
         documentation.  If you have a document to submit, either you or
@@ -122,15 +122,7 @@
 href=\"http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=129784\">129784</a>
 is being used to track tutorial ideas with no writer assigned to
 them. If you are looking for a topic, refer to this bug to see if
-anything sparks your interest.</p> <p>Documents in progress
-include:</p>
-
-<ul>
-<li>FC3 Installation Guide</li>
-<li>Software Management with Yum</li>
-<li>Release Notes</li>
-</ul>
-
+anything sparks your interest.</p> 
 ");
 
 $project->addMisc("Fedora Documentation Steering Committee (FDSCo)","
@@ -166,9 +158,11 @@
 <p>Fedora Editors:</p>
 
 <ul>
-<li>Tammy Fox</li>
-<li>Paul W. Frields</li>
-<li>Karsten Wade</li>
+<li>Tammy Fox (technical, wordsmith)</li>
+<li>Paul W. Frields (technical, wordsmith)</li>
+<li>Karsten Wade (technical, wordsmith)</li>
+<li>Stuart Ellis (technical, wordsmith)</li>
+<li>Rahul Sundaram (technical)</li>
 </ul>
 
 ");


Index: index.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/About/Projects/index.php,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- index.php	29 Nov 2005 17:30:30 -0000	1.1
+++ index.php	6 Dec 2005 06:53:02 -0000	1.2
@@ -11,8 +11,7 @@
 <!-- content BEGIN -->
 <h1>Projects</h1>
 <p>
-<? print "$THE_PROJECT_NAME"; ?> is made up of many smaller projects. The pages
-in this section describe the purpose of these projects.
+<? print "$THE_PROJECT_NAME"; ?> is made up of many smaller projects.  These <strong>Project</strong> pages describe the project's purpose.
 Each project has a project maintainer. Patches and suggestions should be sent to the maintainer
 via <a href="http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/">Bugzilla</a>. Emailing the maintainer directly is not the proper way to submit a request.
 </p>