End-user documentation for 7.x
Kelson Vibber
kelson at speed.net
Mon Jan 19 17:49:11 UTC 2004
At 09:22 AM 1/19/2004, Sean Kerner wrote:
>Suggestion: Second sentence change to:
>It will help you to keep your system up to date and is used by Fedora Core,
>the successor of Red Hat Linux.
<nit-pick>
I'd like to make another suggestion on this one: I think "successor to"
would be more appropriate than "successor of"
</nit-pick>
Kelson Vibber
SpeedGate Communications <www.speed.net>
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