Fedora 8 PDF.

[Marc Wiriadisastra]

On Wed, 2007-11-07 at 18:21 -0500, Michael Beckwith wrote:
> This is a mass preliminary e-mail to three mailing lists.
> 
> What I have done so far with the marketing PDF is get the content and 
> images laid out and desiring feedback for it at this stage. After I get 
> some technical critique and suggestions, I'll go ahead and work on 
> visual presentation.
> 
> Some notes that I have that I have seen is:
> 
> -a need to seperate some of the feature paragraphs with a line or some 
> sort of visual blockage so people know where to stop.
> -locate where "word divisions" is so that the justification of the text 
> doesn't string out so much of the words in some areas.
> -decorate and also fill the 9th page with technical information.
> -find some image to use on the 1st page at the top. A header is needed.
> 
> latest PDF: http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/11-7.pdf
> tarball with all files: 
> http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/F8-Press-Release.tar.gz
> 

I agree with your points above but I would add a picture of a few more
bits.  Like eclipse.  Maybe around the pictures but extra spaces and put
a subtitle under each one.

Cheers,

Marc