Fedora Feature Overview
Rahul Sundaram
sundaram at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 23 17:58:46 UTC 2007
Jonathan Roberts wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I've put up a few bits and pieces for the overviews so far.
>
> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JonathanRoberts/F8Overview
>
> What do people think? Is the text appropriate/long enough/too
> long/giving correct information!? Would be good to get some feedback
> before I go on too much further so I know I'm heading along the right
> tracks!
I think we need to change the track a bit. Use very simple language.
Less technical. Talk about benefits before features, fill them with
screenshots and screencasts, Some comparisons.
http://news.opensuse.org/?p=341
http://news.opensuse.org/?p=400
http://www.ubuntu.com/getubuntu/releasenotes/710tour
http://wiki.mandriva.com/en/Releases/Mandriva/2008.0/Tour
http://wiki.mandriva.com/en/Releases/Mandriva/2008.0/Notes
Rahul
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