Fedora 9 Release Party Flyer Help

[Michelle Thompson]

I have one small suggestion. and then an even smaller 
suggestion/comment. :)

1) after the word 'release' in that middle paragraph, i think you meant 
a comma to separate and not a period

now, for a very tiny, subjective comment that you can totally ignore if 
you want to:
2) perhaps we ditch the exclamation after release party in the very top 
title?
there are two other exlamations in the flyer already (one after the tag 
line and then another one after contest), so i feel like the title one 
might could go. that way, it's the Fedora 9 Release Party (sort of the 
title of the event)
		and we're exclaiming the come join! part and the contest! part

cheers,
mt



Máirín Duffy wrote:
> Jeffrey Tadlock wrote:
>> Pretty bad, isn't it?  So, show me what you can do.  Work up a flyer
>> that looks better than my attempt so Fedora can have a decent looking
>> Release Party announcement flyer - I set the bar pretty low!
> 
> What do you think?
> 
> http://people.redhat.com/duffy/misc/blah/
> 
> ~m
>