I checked and updated version numbers (for instance, GNOME 2.27.90 beta is the latest GNOME because GNOME 2.28 isn't yet out) and tried to make the wording flow a little nicer. https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_Alpha_Announcement Steven, it's all yours. https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/16 --Mel