[relnotes] [Fedora Project Wiki] Update of "Docs/Beats/OverView" by PaulFrields

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   * Xfce [[GetVal(DocsDict,XfceVer)]] is available as part of this release.
  
-  * NetworkManager 0.7 provides improved mobile broadband support, including GSM and CDMA devices, and now supports multiple devices and ad-hoc networking for sharing connections. It is now enabled by default on regular installations too in additional to live image installations. 
+  * NetworkManager 0.7 provides improved mobile broadband support, including GSM and CDMA devices, and now supports multiple devices and ad-hoc networking for sharing connections. It is now enabled by default on installations from DVD, CD, the network, and Live images. 
  
-  * The Fedora installer, '''Anaconda''', now supports partition resizing for ext2/3, NTFS filesystems, creating and installing to encrypted file systems, improved Rescue Mode (FirstAidKit), independent locations for the second stage installer and the software packages. A redesigned, larger `netboot.iso` image now features a second stage installer partly for this reason.
+  * The Fedora installer, '''Anaconda''', now supports partition resizing for ext2/3, NTFS filesystems, creating and installing to encrypted file systems, improved Rescue Mode with FirstAidKit, independent locations for the second stage installer and the software packages. A redesigned, larger `netboot.iso` image now features a second stage installer partly for this reason.
  
-  * Live images now support persistence so your data and setting changes will be preserved even after rebooting the live CD/DVD.
+  * Live USB images now support persistence, so your data and setting changes will be preserved even after rebooting.
  
-  * [http://www.packagekit.org/ PackageKit], a new set of graphical, console tools and framework for cross-distribution software management has replaced Pirut in this release of Fedora.  The Package``Kit graphical updater is available instead of '''Pup'''.  Behind Package``Kit, the performance of `yum` has been significantly improved.
+  * [http://www.packagekit.org/ PackageKit], a new set of graphical and console tools, with a framework for cross-distribution software management, has replaced Pirut in this release of Fedora.  The Package``Kit graphical updater is available instead of '''Pup'''.  Behind Package``Kit, the performance of `yum` has been significantly improved.
   
   * The swfdec package, which decodes and renders Flash animations and videos, is now installed by default. However, many videos require additional codec support. Refer to http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/AdditionalCodecs for more information. 
  
-  *  Free``IPA makes managing auditing, identity and policy processes easier by providing web-based and command line provisioning and administration tools that takes the pain away from system administration: it combines the power of the Fedora Directory Server with Free``RADIUS, MIT Kerberos, NTP and DNS to provide an easy, out of the box solution.
+  *  Free``IPA makes managing auditing, identity and policy processes easier by providing web-based and command line provisioning, and administration tools to ease system administration.  FreeIPA combines the power of the Fedora Directory Server with Free``RADIUS, MIT Kerberos, NTP and DNS to provide an easy, out of the box solution.
  
   * [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ext4 Ext4], the next version of the mature and stable ext3 filesystem is available as a option in this release. Ext4 features better performance, higher storage capacity and several other new features.
  
   * This release of Fedora uses ["Upstart"], an event-based replacement for the `/sbin/init` daemon.
  
-  * Firefox 3 brings a number of major improvements including a native look and feel, desktop integration, the new Places replacement for bookmarks and a re-worked address bar.
+  * Firefox 3 brings a number of major improvements including a native look and feel, desktop integration, the new Places replacement for bookmarks, and a re-worked address bar.
  
   * The completely free and open source Java environment OpenJDK 6 is installed by default.  IcedTea 7, derived from OpenJDK 1.7, is no longer the default.  IcedTea includes a browser plugin based on GCJ, and is available for both x86 and x86_64 architectures. GCJ is still the default on PPC architecture.