Draft of Install Test SOP,Could you help to find some problems?

[Liam]

Greetings,

      This is a draft (standard operating procedure) for Fedora Install
test.This document involves process or steps by which QA organize
install test in community. The purpose of SOP is to make QA's
responsibilities transparent,so anyone can join + lead + contribute in
this test in the near future.
      This page is only a draft now,need your suggestions and
corrections,do you have some comments?
      The page of draft at:
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Liam/Draft_Install_Test_SOP

Thanks
Liam