HTML version of README for Live USB
Peter Scheie
peter at scheie.homedns.org
Fri Aug 29 12:49:32 UTC 2008
Warren Togami wrote:
> Peter Scheie wrote:
>> I moved the directory with the first draft to make room for the second
>> draft. You'll find them both at http://petre.homedns.org/f9-ltsp/
>> In the second draft, I reduced all the images to 8-bit color. They
>> look a bit washed out, but I think are still quite readable. Whereas
>> draft 1 was a total of 1228KB, draft2 is only 276KB! Is that small
>> enough Warren?
>>
>> Peter
>
> Good choice to eliminate the background texture. It really is
> irrelevant to convey to the user what actions are needed. It also
> "debrands" the screenshot so it could refer to Fedora 9 or Fedora 10.
> (Although possibly it could be simplified further in Fedora 10 if the
> tools have improved. For example I believe Dan Williams did some work
> to have NetworkManager support BRIDGE= syntax. We need to check on this
> soon.)
>
> Title of the page still says "Live USB" which is not entirely accurate.
>
Doh! Missed that one. The top of the document says 'Fedora Live LTSP Server 9
Beta 1 README' while the title makes reference to K12Linux; should they both
perhaps say 'K12Linux Live Server README'? Or is that name still up in the air?
> So, I did not expect you to cut size nearly this much. Perhaps this was
> a little too much. It looks good enough, except for the striping effect
> in the menus and drop-down boxes. Please use your best judgement to
> find the right balance of look and size.
>
Agreed about the striping. I actually wanted 16-bit color, but KolourPaint
doesn't offer that. I also reduced the size of several of the images, instead
of just specifying their size in the HTML, which helped a bit, too.
Surprisingly, I think the shots of the full desktop came out looking best,
despite their arguable greater complexity color-wise. I'll twiddle with them
some more this weekend. Does anyone know of a command-line utility for reducing
an image from 24-bit to 16-bit color?
> Here is the plan how we will ship your new HTML-ized README. It will be
> installed via its own package like ltsp-server-setupdoc. All of the
> files will be dropped into a directory like
> /usr/share/ltsp-server-setupdoc/. The reason it has its own package is
> because this does not belong in the ltsp upstream or within ltsp
> software packages. This is a Fedora specific thing.
>
> I notice that the screenshots have the Beta 1 text file on the Desktop.
> We will replace this with a .desktop launcher that runs firefox with
> file:///usr/share/ltsp-server-setupdoc/something.html as the parameter.
> For your screenshot you can create .desktop launcher by right-clicking
> on the desktop and "Create Launcher..." Please call it "README LTSP
> Server Setup". The spaces are fine. Try to find an icon that is
> already shipped in the Live image that would be appropriate for this
> launcher. Send me the raw .desktop file after you have created it and
> chosen an icon so I can package it.
>
Will do.
Peter
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