[libvirt] [PATCH] esx: Improve documentation about remote URIs
Matthias Bolte
matthias.bolte at googlemail.com
Sat Mar 13 14:22:09 UTC 2010
2010/3/13 Eric Blake <eblake at redhat.com>:
> On 03/12/2010 02:34 PM, Matthias Bolte wrote:
>> ---
>> docs/drvesx.html.in | 8 ++++++++
>> 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/docs/drvesx.html.in b/docs/drvesx.html.in
>> index 9b413ab..6855298 100644
>> --- a/docs/drvesx.html.in
>> +++ b/docs/drvesx.html.in
>> @@ -32,6 +32,14 @@ gsx://example.com (GSX over HTTPS)
>> esx://example.com/?transport=http (ESX over HTTP)
>> esx://example.com/?no_verify=1 (ESX over HTTPS, but doesn't verify the server's SSL certificate)
>> </pre>
>> + <p>
>> + <strong>Note</strong>: In contrast to other drivers, the ESX driver is
>> + a client-side-only driver. That means you cannot use the
>> + <a href="remote.html">remote transport mechanism</a> provided by the
>> + remote driver and libvirtd. Instead the ESX driver communicates to the
>> + ESX server using HTTP(S). Therefore, you cannot use URIs like
>> + <code>esx+ssh://example.com</code>.
>
> That reads awkwardly. Might I suggest something a little more concise:
>
> In contrast to other drivers, the ESX driver is a client-side-only
> driver. The ESX driver connects to the local ESX server using HTTP(S).
> Therefore, the <a...>remote transport mechanism</a> provided by the
> remote driver and libvirtd will not work, and you cannot use URIs like
> <code>esx+ssh://example.com</code>.
>
Yes, that's better. I'm going to push it with a slight modification:
"It connects" instead of "The ESX driver connects" in the second
sentence, to avoid a repetition of "The ESX driver".
Thanks.
Matthias
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