[libvirt] [PATCH] doc: update virsh manual
Eric Blake
eblake at redhat.com
Wed Nov 17 17:31:00 UTC 2010
On 11/17/2010 07:15 AM, Osier Yang wrote:
> * tools/virsh.pod (change things like "edit domain.xml" into
> "vi domain.xml", so that it's more clear for user)
> ---
> tools/virsh.pod | 16 ++++++++--------
> 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
> index 8032256..ca8ba74 100644
> --- a/tools/virsh.pod
> +++ b/tools/virsh.pod
> @@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ L<http://libvirt.org/formatdomain.html#elementsCPU>
>
> The following commands manipulate domains directly, as stated
> previously most commands take domain-id as the first parameter. The
> -I<domain-id> can be specified as an short integer, a name or a full UUID.
> +I<domain-id> can be specified as a short integer, a name or a full UUID.
>
> =over 4
>
> @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ If I<--console> is requested, attach to the console after creation.
> B<Example>
>
> virsh dumpxml <domain-id> > domain.xml
> - edit domain.xml
> + vi domain.xml (or make changes with your other text editor)
Thanks for reviving this; and your wording works for me (I'm sure I
could bike shed several other wording choices, but this one's reasonable
enough to avoid any further delays).
ACK, and applied.
--
Eric Blake eblake at redhat.com +1-801-349-2682
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org
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