[libvirt] [PATCH v2] virsh: Two new fields for command domblklist
Eric Blake
eblake at redhat.com
Thu Jan 12 23:00:57 UTC 2012
On 01/12/2012 03:53 AM, Osier Yang wrote:
> Disk "type" and "device" are generally interesting stuffs the
s/stuffs/stuff/
> user who wants to known too. To not breaking the scripts which
s/who wants to known too/may want to know, too/
s/breaking the/break any/
> parses the output field, new options "--details" is introduced
s/parses/parsed/
s/new options/a new option/
> to output the two introduced fields.
> ---
> tools/virsh.c | 32 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
> tools/virsh.pod | 19 ++++++++++---------
> 2 files changed, 39 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
>
> +++ b/tools/virsh.pod
> @@ -512,15 +512,16 @@ to a unique target name (<target dev='name'/>) or source file (<source
> file='name'/>) for one of the disk devices attached to I<domain> (see
> also B<domblklist> for listing these names).
>
> -=item B<domblklist> I<domain> [I<--inactive>]
> -
> -Print a table showing the names of all block devices associated with
> -I<domain>, as well as the path to the source of each device. If
> -I<--inactive> is specified, query the block devices that will be used
> -on the next boot, rather than those currently in use by a running
> -domain. Other contexts that require a block device name (such as
> -I<domblkinfo> or I<snapshot-create> for disk snapshots) will accept
> -either target or unique source names printed by this command.
> +=item B<domblklist> I<domain> [I<--inactive>] [I<--details>]
> +
> +Print a table showing the brief information of all block devices
> +associated with I<domain>. If I<--inactive> is specified, query the
> +block devices that will be used on the next boot, rather than those
> +currently in use by a running domain. If I<--details> is specified,
> +disk type and device value will be printed additionally. Other
s/be printed additionally/also be printed/
> +contexts that require a block device name (such as I<domblkinfo>
> +or I<snapshot-create> for disk snapshots) will accept either target
> +or unique source names printed by this command.
ACK with the grammar cleanups. And don't feel bad - English can be a
tough language; you did quite well at getting the point across, even if
I was able to provide some ideas to polish the final wording. :)
--
Eric Blake eblake at redhat.com +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org
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