[libvirt] [PATCH 2/2] manual: Fix copy-paste errors

[Peter Krempa]

On 04/02/13 16:15, Martin Kletzander wrote:
> Descriptions for vol-download and vol-upload didn't make much of a
> sense.

s/of a//

>
> Resolves: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=923613
> ---
>   tools/virsh.pod | 6 +++---
>   1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
> index 11447fe..768b334 100644
> --- a/tools/virsh.pod
> +++ b/tools/virsh.pod
> @@ -2541,7 +2541,7 @@ I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to delete.
>   Upload the contents of I<local-file> to a storage volume.
>   I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid> is the name or UUID of the storage pool the volume
>   is in.
> -I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to wipe.
> +I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to write to.

I'd write:
I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume 
where the file will be uploaded.

>   I<--offset> is the position in the storage volume at which to start writing
>   the data. I<--length> is an upper bound of the amount of data to be uploaded.
>   An error will occur if the I<local-file> is greater than the specified length.
> @@ -2549,10 +2549,10 @@ An error will occur if the I<local-file> is greater than the specified length.
>   =item B<vol-download> [I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid>] [I<--offset> I<bytes>]
>   [I<--length> I<bytes>] I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> I<local-file>
>
> -Download the contents of I<local-file> from a storage volume.
> +Download the contents of a storage volume to I<local-file>.
>   I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid> is the name or UUID of the storage pool the volume
>   is in.
> -I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to wipe.
> +I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to download.
>   I<--offset> is the position in the storage volume at which to start reading
>   the data. I<--length> is an upper bound of the amount of data to be downloaded.
>

ACK with or without my suggestion used.

Peter