[libvirt] [PATCH 2/3] Doc: Improve the document for nodesuspend

[Osier Yang]

On 22/01/14 17:32, Ján Tomko wrote:
> On 01/22/2014 07:55 AM, Osier Yang wrote:
>> Explicitly lists the possible values for "--target" option;
>> Gets rid of the confused strings like "Suspend-to-RAM";
>> Emphasises the node *has to* be suspended in the time duration
>> specified by "--duration". And rewords the entire document a
>> bit according to the API's implementation and document.
>> ---
>>   tools/virsh.pod | 13 ++++++++-----
>>   1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
>> index 8839e3c..35a7292 100644
>> --- a/tools/virsh.pod
>> +++ b/tools/virsh.pod
>> @@ -297,11 +297,14 @@ If I<cell> is specified, this will prints specified cell statistics only.
>>   
>>   =item B<nodesuspend> [I<target>] [I<duration>]
>>   
>> -Puts the node (host machine) into a system-wide sleep state such as
>> -Suspend-to-RAM, Suspend-to-Disk or Hybrid-Suspend and sets up a
>> -Real-Time-Clock interrupt to fire (to wake up the node) after a time delay
>> -specified by the 'duration' parameter. The duration time should be
>> -at least 60 seconds.
>> +Puts the node (host machine) into a system-wide sleep state and schedule
>> +the node's Real-Time-Clock interrupt to resume the node after the time
>> +duration specified by I<duration> is out.
>> +I<target> specifies the state to which the host will be suspended to, it
>> +can be "mem"(suspended to RAM), "disk"(suspended to disk), or "hybrid"
>> +(suspended to both RAM and disk).  I<duration> specifies the time duration
> This would look better with spaces in front of the parentheses. I think
> 'suspend' instead of 'suspended' would look better inside the parentheses too.
>

Pushed with above suggestions, thanks for the reviewing.

Osier