[libvirt] [PATCH] docs: bhyve: document recent changes

[Roman Bogorodskiy]

  Ján Tomko wrote:

> On 07/24/2014 05:54 PM, Roman Bogorodskiy wrote:
> >  - mention that one disk and one network limitation
> >    is no longer actual for 1.2.6 and newer
> 
> s/actual/current/
> 
> >  - add 'cdrom' device to the sample domain XML
> > ---
> >  docs/drvbhyve.html.in | 12 +++++++++---
> >  1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> > 
> 
> ACK
> 
> > diff --git a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
> > index e75eb83..9a97c57 100644
> > --- a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
> > +++ b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
> > @@ -42,9 +42,10 @@ in this sample domain XML.
> >  </p>
> >  
> >  <p>
> > -A limitation that is not obvious from this sample domain XML is that currently only a
> > -single network and a single disk device are supported for each domain (as PCI slot allocation code
> > -in libvirt bhyve driver is yet to be implemented).
> > +Note: an older versions of the libvirt bhyve driver had a limitation that only a
> > +single network and a single disk device were supported for each domain. However,
> 
> s/an older/older/
> s/network/network device/ reads better to me.
> 
> or even simpler:
> 
> Note: in older libvirt versions, only a single network device and a single
> disk device were supported per-domain.

Pushed with the suggested fixes, thanks!

Roman Bogorodskiy
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