[libvirt] [PATCH v2 1/3] NEWS: Improve building pipeline

[Andrea Bolognani]

On Thu, 2017-01-05 at 15:54 +0100, Martin Kletzander wrote:
> > +        <xsl:apply-templates select="release"/>
> > +        <p>Older libvirt releases detailed their changes using a different
> > +        format and as such are excluded from the list above. You can read
> > +        about those older release, starting from those made in
> 
> I think you meant s/those older release/older releases/ here.  Or
> s/those/any/, I don't know.  Just make it readable ;)

How does

  Older libvirt releases didn't have proper release notes,
  and as such are not included in this page: if you're
  looking for information about them, start from those made
  in 2016 and work your way back.

sound to you?

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Andrea Bolognani / Red Hat / Virtualization