[libvirt] [PATCH] NEWS: Add trailing periods to all sentences

Laine Stump laine at laine.org
Tue Jan 10 19:31:35 UTC 2017


ACK. I never liked the idea of multiple sentences where everything 
except the final sentence ends with a period (but it wasn't worth 
complaining about).

On 01/10/2017 01:57 PM, Andrea Bolognani wrote:
> Suggested-by: John Ferlan <jferlan at redhat.com>
> ---
>   docs/news.xml | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
>   1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/news.xml b/docs/news.xml
> index 909b4ca..672e988 100644
> --- a/docs/news.xml
> +++ b/docs/news.xml
> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
>           <description>
>             Add the capability to allow group I/O throttling via a new
>             domain <disk> <iotune> subelement "group_name"
> -          to allow sharing I/O throttling quota between multiple drives
> +          to allow sharing I/O throttling quota between multiple drives.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             New <code>libvirt-guest</code> nss module that translates libvirt
> -          guest names into IP addresses
> +          guest names into IP addresses.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
>           <description>
>             Logging-related settings like log outputs and filters can now be
>             adjusted during runtime using the admin interface without the
> -          necessity of the daemon's restart
> +          necessity of the daemon's restart.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
>             flag in order to return the host physical size in bytes
>             of the image container in the allocation field of the
>             _virStorageVolInfo structure. The --physical flag has been
> -          added to the virsh vol-info command to access the data
> +          added to the virsh vol-info command to access the data.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
>             Add support to get the count of branch instructions
>             executed, branch misses, bus cycles, stalled frontend
>             cpu cycles, stalled backend cpu cycles, and ref cpu
> -          cycles by applications running on the platform
> +          cycles by applications running on the platform.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             Add a display of the <physical> size of a disk
> -          volume in the output of the volume XML
> +          volume in the output of the volume XML.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
>             virtio-pci provides several advantages over virtio-mmio, such
>             as the ability to hotplug devices and improved performance.
>             While opting in to virtio-pci has been possible for a while,
> -          newly-defined guests will now use it automatically
> +          newly-defined guests will now use it automatically.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>       </section>
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
>             For an active domain, correct the physical value provided for
>             a raw sparse file backed storage and the allocation value provided
>             for a qcow2 file backed storage that hasn't yet been opened on
> -          the domain
> +          the domain.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             The chardev detection code has been improved and can now handle this
> -          configuration properly
> +          configuration properly.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             The shmem device can now utilize QEMU's ivshmem-plain and
> -          ivshmem-doorbell, more modern versions of ivshmem
> +          ivshmem-doorbell, more modern versions of ivshmem.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
>           <description>
>             The new libssh transport allows one to connect to a running
>             libvirtd via SSH, using the libssh library; for example:
> -          <tt>qemu+libssh://<i>server</i>/system</tt>
> +          <tt>qemu+libssh://<i>server</i>/system</tt>.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             Add the capability to pass through a scsi_host HBA and the
> -          associated LUNs to the guest
> +          associated LUNs to the guest.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
>             e1000e, nec-xhci, vfio assigned devices) will be placed on
>             an Express controller (i.e. a pcie-root-port) instead of a
>             legacy PCI controller (i.e. pci-bridge) with the root ports
> -          added as needed
> +          added as needed.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>       </section>
> @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
>           </summary>
>           <description>
>             List user-visible changes instead of single commits for a better
> -          high-level overview of differences between libvirt releases
> +          high-level overview of differences between libvirt releases.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>         <change>
> @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
>           <description>
>             The libvirt website looked very cluttered and outdated; it has now
>             been completely overhauled, resulting in a design that's better
> -          organized and more pleasant to look at
> +          organized and more pleasant to look at.
>           </description>
>         </change>
>       </section>





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