[libvirt] [PATCH] NEWS: Add trailing periods to all sentences
Laine Stump
laine at laine.org
Tue Jan 10 19:31:35 UTC 2017
ACK. I never liked the idea of multiple sentences where everything
except the final sentence ends with a period (but it wasn't worth
complaining about).
On 01/10/2017 01:57 PM, Andrea Bolognani wrote:
> Suggested-by: John Ferlan <jferlan at redhat.com>
> ---
> docs/news.xml | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
> 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/news.xml b/docs/news.xml
> index 909b4ca..672e988 100644
> --- a/docs/news.xml
> +++ b/docs/news.xml
> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
> <description>
> Add the capability to allow group I/O throttling via a new
> domain <disk> <iotune> subelement "group_name"
> - to allow sharing I/O throttling quota between multiple drives
> + to allow sharing I/O throttling quota between multiple drives.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> New <code>libvirt-guest</code> nss module that translates libvirt
> - guest names into IP addresses
> + guest names into IP addresses.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
> <description>
> Logging-related settings like log outputs and filters can now be
> adjusted during runtime using the admin interface without the
> - necessity of the daemon's restart
> + necessity of the daemon's restart.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
> flag in order to return the host physical size in bytes
> of the image container in the allocation field of the
> _virStorageVolInfo structure. The --physical flag has been
> - added to the virsh vol-info command to access the data
> + added to the virsh vol-info command to access the data.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
> Add support to get the count of branch instructions
> executed, branch misses, bus cycles, stalled frontend
> cpu cycles, stalled backend cpu cycles, and ref cpu
> - cycles by applications running on the platform
> + cycles by applications running on the platform.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> Add a display of the <physical> size of a disk
> - volume in the output of the volume XML
> + volume in the output of the volume XML.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
> virtio-pci provides several advantages over virtio-mmio, such
> as the ability to hotplug devices and improved performance.
> While opting in to virtio-pci has been possible for a while,
> - newly-defined guests will now use it automatically
> + newly-defined guests will now use it automatically.
> </description>
> </change>
> </section>
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
> For an active domain, correct the physical value provided for
> a raw sparse file backed storage and the allocation value provided
> for a qcow2 file backed storage that hasn't yet been opened on
> - the domain
> + the domain.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> The chardev detection code has been improved and can now handle this
> - configuration properly
> + configuration properly.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> The shmem device can now utilize QEMU's ivshmem-plain and
> - ivshmem-doorbell, more modern versions of ivshmem
> + ivshmem-doorbell, more modern versions of ivshmem.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
> <description>
> The new libssh transport allows one to connect to a running
> libvirtd via SSH, using the libssh library; for example:
> - <tt>qemu+libssh://<i>server</i>/system</tt>
> + <tt>qemu+libssh://<i>server</i>/system</tt>.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> Add the capability to pass through a scsi_host HBA and the
> - associated LUNs to the guest
> + associated LUNs to the guest.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
> e1000e, nec-xhci, vfio assigned devices) will be placed on
> an Express controller (i.e. a pcie-root-port) instead of a
> legacy PCI controller (i.e. pci-bridge) with the root ports
> - added as needed
> + added as needed.
> </description>
> </change>
> </section>
> @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
> </summary>
> <description>
> List user-visible changes instead of single commits for a better
> - high-level overview of differences between libvirt releases
> + high-level overview of differences between libvirt releases.
> </description>
> </change>
> <change>
> @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
> <description>
> The libvirt website looked very cluttered and outdated; it has now
> been completely overhauled, resulting in a design that's better
> - organized and more pleasant to look at
> + organized and more pleasant to look at.
> </description>
> </change>
> </section>
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