[libvirt] [PATCH v3 12/12] news: Update news for PCI address extension attributes

[Yi Min Zhao]

在 2018/8/20 下午6:17, Andrea Bolognani 写道:
> On Mon, 2018-08-20 at 11:39 +0800, Yi Min Zhao wrote:
>> 在 2018/8/18 上午12:21, Andrea Bolognani 写道:
>>> On Tue, 2018-08-07 at 17:10 +0800, Yi Min Zhao wrote:
>>> [...]
>>>> +      <change>
>>>> +        <summary>
>>>> +          qemu: Added support for PCI device passthrough on S390
>>>> +        </summary>
>>>> +        <description>
>>>> +          The new zPCI attributes uid (user-defined identifier)
>>>> +          and fid (PCI function identifier) of the S390 platform
>>>> +          extend the PCI device address to support the PCI
>>>> +          passthrough on S390.
>>>> +        </description>
>>>> +      </change>
>>> This doesn't look entirely accurate: the attributes are not only
>>> used for assigned devices but for emulated devices as well, so
>>> the text should reflect that.
>> How about:
>>
>> *** to support the PCI functionality on S390.
> Perhaps something like
>
>    qemu: Added support for PCI devices on s390
>
>    PCI addresses can now include the new uid (user-defined
>    identifier) and fid (PCI function identifier) attributes, which
>    make the corresponding devices usable by s390 guests.
>
Better, I will do a little update based on your words.