[Patternfly] NCDevCon

[Greg Sheremeta]

Btw, the call for speakers is set to close June 1st. So we need to submit this by Friday.

Greg

----- Original Message -----
> From: "Greg Sheremeta" <gshereme at redhat.com>
> To: "Robb Hamilton" <rhamilto at redhat.com>
> Cc: patternfly at redhat.com, "Einav Cohen" <ecohen at redhat.com>
> Sent: Wednesday, May 28, 2014 8:02:57 AM
> Subject: Re: [Patternfly] NCDevCon
> 
> I added my bio, and also tweaked the last sentence to take the emphasis off
> of Red Hat.
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Robb Hamilton" <rhamilto at redhat.com>
> > To: "Gabriel Cardoso" <gcardoso at redhat.com>
> > Cc: "Greg Sheremeta" <gshereme at redhat.com>, patternfly at redhat.com, "Einav
> > Cohen" <ecohen at redhat.com>
> > Sent: Tuesday, May 27, 2014 11:18:51 AM
> > Subject: Re: [Patternfly] NCDevCon
> > 
> > great feedback, gabriel.  thanks! i’ve implemented your recommendation.
> > 
> > keep ‘em coming!
> > 
> > On May 27, 2014, at 11:15 AM, Gabriel Cardoso <gcardoso at redhat.com> wrote:
> > 
> > > Hi Robb,
> > > 
> > > By reading the text I had the impression that the emphasis is on
> > > Bootstrap,
> > > not on Patternfly. It seems that we created patternfly because of
> > > bootstrap, and not because of the need for design commonality. Is that
> > > what you want to communicate?
> > > 
> > > If so, it’s perfect. If not, you just need to invert the order of the
> > > sentences, e.g: "Creating a common UI across projects using Bootstrap”,
> > > and start the text talking about patternfly and the need for commonality,
> > > quoting Bootstrap later.
> > > 
> > > Hope that makes sense.
> > > 
> > > Gabriel
> > > 
> > > 
> > > On May 27, 2014, at 10:46 AM, Robb Hamilton <rhamilto at redhat.com> wrote:
> > > 
> > >> https://etherpad.mozilla.org/vCVGboq5gM
> > > 
> > > ---
> > > Gabriel Cardoso
> > > User Experience Designer @ Red Hat
> > > 
> > 
> > 
> 
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