install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13226

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:29 -0000	1.9
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
   <title>Installing Packages</title>
 
   <para>
-    &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
+    &FC; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
     the selected packages to your system.  Network and DVD installations
-    require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED;
+    require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FC;
     prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc,
     select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
   </para>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     
   <para>
     After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton>
-    to restart your computer.  &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the
+    to restart your computer.  &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the
     computer reboots.
   </para>