install-guide fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,1.5,1.6

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13295

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	22 May 2005 14:17:00 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:48 -0000	1.6
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
       <title>Documentation on the Web</title>
 
       <para>
-	The official documentation for &FC; is available from the &FP;
+	Documentation for &FC; is available from the &FP;
 	Website:
       </para>
-
+    <!-- institutional shyness of the word official, odd legal standing -->
       <para>
 	<ulink
 	  url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/">http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/</ulink>
@@ -31,6 +31,16 @@
 	  url="http://www.tldp.org/">http://www.tldp.org/</ulink>
       </para>
 
+    <para>
+      For many parts of &FC;, you may find the &RHEL; documentation
+      useful:
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      <ulink
+	url="http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/">http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/</ulink>
+    </para>
+
       <para>
 	Many other organizations and individuals also provide tutorials
 	and HOWTOs for &FED; on their Websites.  You can locate
@@ -70,7 +80,7 @@
 
    <para>
       The &FP; is driven by the individuals that contribute to it.  Community
-      members provide support to other users, help to improve the
+      members provide support and documentation to other users, help to improve the
       software included in &FC; by testing, and develop new software
       alongside the developers employed by &RH;.  The results of this
       work are available to all.