install-guide fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.13, 1.14

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13318

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000	1.13
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:55 -0000	1.14
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
     <title>Installation from a Hard Drive</title>
 
     <para>
-      You may install from a hard drive which contains the ISO image
+      You may install from a hard drive that contains the ISO image
       files for the &FED; discs.  The hard drive may be internal to the
       computer or attached by USB.  The partition on the hard drive
       holding the ISO files must be formatted with the <indexterm>
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <note>
-      <title>FAT-16, FAT-32 and <systemitem
+      <title>FAT-16, FAT-32, and <systemitem
 	  class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></title>
       <para>
 	Before you begin installation from a hard drive, check the