fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 17:01:44 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
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--- fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	2 May 2005 22:24:28 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	9 May 2005 17:01:42 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,137 +1,135 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
 
 <chapter>
-  <title>Upgrading Over An Existing System</title>
+  <title>Upgrading an Existing System</title>
 
   <para>
-	The installation system will automatically detect any existing
-	installation of &FC;.  If there is a copy of &FC; then you will be
-	presented with this screen:
+    The installation system will automatically detect any existing
+    installation of &FC;.  If there is a copy of &FC; then you will be
+    presented with this screen:
   </para>
 
-    <figure id="fig-upgrade-examine">
-     <title>Upgrade Examine Screen</title>
-      <mediaobject>
-       <imageobject>
+  <figure id="fig-upgrade-examine">
+    <title>Upgrade Examine Screen</title>
+    <mediaobject>
+      <imageobject>
         <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.eps" format="EPS"/>
-       </imageobject>
-       <imageobject>
+      </imageobject>
+      <imageobject>
         <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.png" format="PNG"/>
-       </imageobject>
-       <textobject>
+      </imageobject>
+      <textobject>
         <para>
-         Upgrade examine screen.
+	  Upgrade examine screen.
         </para>
-       </textobject>
-      </mediaobject>
-    </figure>
-
+      </textobject>
+    </mediaobject>
+  </figure>
 
-  <sect1>
-   <title>Upgrading an Existing System</title>
 
-    <para>
-	To perform an upgrade of an existing system, select the appropriate
-	installation from the drop-down list before selecting <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.  
-    </para>
+  <para>
+    To perform an upgrade of an existing system, select the appropriate
+    installation from the drop-down list and then select
+    <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.  
+  </para>
 
-    <para>
-	An upgrade will update the existing &FC; installation using the software
-	packages for the new version.  Your data and the configuration of your
-	system will not be changed or lost.  The upgrade process
-	does not delete any files in the <filename>/home/</filename> and
-	the <filename>/usr/local/</filename> directories.  
-    </para>
+  <para>
+    An upgrade consists of updating the existing &FC; or &RHL;
+    installation with the software packages for the new version.  Your
+    data is not lost, and the existing partition structure on your hard
+    drives does not change.  Your system configuration changes only if a
+    package upgrade demands it.  The upgrade process does not delete any
+    files in the <filename>/home/</filename> and the
+    <filename>/usr/local/</filename> directories.
+  </para>
 
+  <note>
+    <title>Manually Installed Software</title>
     <para>
-      The existing partition structure on the hard drives of your machine is
-      also not altered by an upgrade.
+      Software which you installed manually on your existing &FC; or
+      &RHL; system may behave differently after an upgrade.  You may
+      manually recompile this software after an upgrade to ensure it
+      performs correctly on the updated system.
     </para>
-
-   <note>
-    <title>Upgrades may affect manually installed software</title>
-     <para>
-	Software may behave differently after an upgrade.  Manually compiled
-	software should be recompiled after an upgrade to ensure that it
-	performs correctly on the updated system.
-     </para>
-   </note>
+  </note>
 
 
-  <sect2>
-   <title>Upgrading Boot Loader Configuration</title>
+  <section>
+    <title>Upgrading Boot Loader Configuration</title>
 
-   <para>
-	Your completed &FC; installation must be registered in the
-	<firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> in order for it to start.  The boot
-	loader is the software on your machine that boots the main operating
-	system.  If you have multiple operating systems then the boot loader
-	determines which operating system to boot, usually by offering a menu of
-	options to the user.  Operating systems install their own preferred
-	boot loader, but you may have chosen to use a third-party boot loader.
-   </para>
+    <para>
+      Your completed &FC; installation must be registered in the
+      <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> to boot properly.  The boot
+      loader is software on your machine that locates and starts the
+      operating system.  If you have multiple operating systems, the
+      boot loader determines which one to boot, usually by offering a
+      menu.  An operating system may install its own preferred boot
+      loader, or you may have installed a third-party boot loader.
+    </para>
 
 
     <figure id="fig-upgrade-bootloader">
-     <title>Upgrade Bootloader Screen</title>
+      <title>Upgrade Bootloader Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
-       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.eps" format="EPS"/>
-       </imageobject>
-       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.png" format="PNG"/>
-       </imageobject>
-       <textobject>
-        <para>
-         Upgrade bootloader screen.
-        </para>
-       </textobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.eps" format="EPS"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.png" format="PNG"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<textobject>
+	  <para>
+	    Upgrade bootloader screen.
+	  </para>
+	</textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
 
-   <para>
-	If the existing boot loader has been installed by a Linux distribution
-	then the installation system can modify it to load the new &FC; system.
-	To amend a Linux boot loader, select <guilabel>Update boot loader configuration</guilabel>.
-	This is default option for upgrading from one version of &FC; to another.
-   </para>
-
-   <note>
-    <title>GRUB is the default boot loader</title>
-     <para>
-	GRUB is the default boot loader installed by &FC;, recent &RH; operating
-	systems and some other Linux distributions.  &FC; also supports LILO,
-	the boot loader provided by older Linux distributions.
+    <para>
+      If the existing boot loader has been installed by a Linux
+      distribution then the installation system can modify it to load
+      the new &FC; system.  To amend a Linux boot loader, select
+      <guilabel>Update boot loader configuration</guilabel>.  This is
+      default option for upgrading from one version of &FC; to another.
+    </para>
+
+    <note>
+      <title>GRUB is the default boot loader</title>
+      <para>
+	GRUB is the default boot loader installed by &FC;, recent &RH;
+	operating systems and some other Linux distributions.  &FC; also
+	supports LILO, the boot loader provided by older Linux
+	distributions.
       </para>
-   </note>
+    </note>
 
-   <para>
-	If your machine is using another boot loader, such as
-	<trademark>BootMagic</trademark> or the loader installed
-	by <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> <trademark
-	class="registered">Windows</trademark>, then the &FED; installation
-	system cannot update it.  You must manually add the settings for loading
-	&FC; after completing the installation process.  To leave the existing
-	boot loader unmodified, select <guilabel>Skip boot loader updating</guilabel>.
-   </para>
-
-   <para>
-	You should only install a new boot loader as part of an upgrade process
-	if you are certain that you wish to replace the existing boot loader.
-	This may prevent other operating systems on the same machine from being
-	loaded until you have reconfigured the new boot loader.  Select
-	<guilabel>Create new boot loader configuration</guilabel> to remove the
-	existing boot loader and install GRUB as part of the installation process.
-   </para>
+    <para>
+      If your machine is using another boot loader, such as
+      <trademark>BootMagic</trademark> or the loader installed by
+      <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> <trademark
+	class="registered">Windows</trademark>, then the &FED;
+      installation system cannot update it.  You must manually add the
+      settings for loading &FC; after completing the installation
+      process.  To leave the existing boot loader unmodified, select
+      <guilabel>Skip boot loader updating</guilabel>.
+    </para>
 
-  <para>
-	Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you have made a selection.
-  </para>
+    <para>
+      You should only install a new boot loader as part of an upgrade
+      process if you are certain that you wish to replace the existing
+      boot loader.  This may prevent other operating systems on the same
+      machine from being loaded until you have reconfigured the new boot
+      loader.  Select <guilabel>Create new boot loader
+	configuration</guilabel> to remove the existing boot loader and
+      install GRUB as part of the installation process.
+    </para>
 
-  </sect2>
+    <para>
+      Click <guibutton>Next</guibutton> once you have made a selection.
+    </para>
 
+  </section>
 
- </sect1>
 </chapter>
 
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