fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
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	fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	3 May 2005 12:19:44 -0000	1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	9 May 2005 20:18:17 -0000	1.4
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
   <title>Installing Packages</title>
 
   <para>
-    The installation process will now take place.  As the installation
-    is carried out you will see the progress reported on screen.
+    The installation process will now take place.  You will see the
+    progress reported on screen.
   </para>
 
   <para>
     If you are using CDs to install &FC; you will be prompted to change
     discs periodically.  After inserting a disc allow two or three
-    seconds for the CD to be detected before clicking
+    seconds for the CD to be detected, before clicking
     <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
   </para>
 
@@ -33,14 +33,14 @@
   </figure>
     
   <para>
-    When the installation has completed you will be prompted to
-    <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> your computer.  Any installation disc
-    in the CD or DVD drive will automatically be ejected.
+    Once the installation has completed you will be prompted to
+    <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> your computer.  Any disc in the CD or
+    DVD drive will automatically be ejected before your computer reboots.
   </para>
 
   <para>
     The first time that your computer loads &FC; you will be presented
-    with a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen and given the opportunity
+    with a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen, and given the opportunity
     to configure various aspects of your new system.  This process is
     explained in the next section.
   </para>