install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv5497

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 
Log Message:

Passive voice fixes.



Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	9 May 2005 20:18:17 -0000	1.4
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	11 May 2005 23:48:36 -0000	1.5
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
   <title>Installing Packages</title>
 
   <para>
-    The installation process will now take place.  You will see the
-    progress reported on screen.
+    The progress of the installation is reported on screen.  Network and
+    DVD installations do not require any action.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -33,15 +33,15 @@
   </figure>
     
   <para>
-    Once the installation has completed you will be prompted to
-    <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> your computer.  Any disc in the CD or
-    DVD drive will automatically be ejected before your computer reboots.
+    Click <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to restart your computer once
+    the installation has completed.  Discs are automatically ejected
+    before the computer reboots.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The first time that your computer loads &FC; you will be presented
-    with a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen, and given the opportunity
-    to configure various aspects of your new system.  This process is
+    The first time that your computer loads &FC;, you are presented with
+    a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen and given the opportunity to
+    configure various aspects of your new system.  This process is
     explained in the next section.
   </para>