install-guide fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,1.4,1.5

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	9 May 2005 20:51:31 -0000	1.4
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	12 May 2005 00:43:48 -0000	1.5
@@ -11,19 +11,24 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    Package selection does not impose any restrictions after the
-    installation process has completed.  You can use the management
-    utilities supplied with &FC; to install or remove any available
-    software from the system at any time.
+  If you chose the Custom installation type then the screen for
+  <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> is shown automatically.
   </para>
 
+  <tip>
+   <title>Installation Choices Are Not Permanent</title>
+    <para>
+    The installation type and packages that you select do not
+    impose any restrictions after the installation process has completed.
+   </para>
+  </tip>
+
 
   <sect1 id="s1-defaultpackages">
     <title>Package Installation Defaults</title>
 
     <para>
-      A summary of the default package selection will be displayed for
-      your approval.
+      A summary of the default package selection is displayed.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-package-default">
@@ -50,21 +55,14 @@
 
     <para>
       To view or change the packages, select <guilabel>Customize
-	software packages to be installed</guilabel>.  This option will
-      take you to the <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel>
-      screen.
+	software packages to be installed</guilabel>.  This option takes
+	you to the <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> screen.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
-      If you chose the Custom installation type then the screen for
-      <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> will automatically be
-      shown at this point instead.
-    </para>
-
   </sect1>
 
 
@@ -72,13 +70,9 @@
     <title>Package Group Selection</title>
 
     <para>
-      Software is managed in groups.  Each group includes packages for a
-      particular system or function.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      These package groups are listed under headings to increase the
-      readability of the screen.
+      The software included with &FC; is divided into <firstterm>package
+      groups</firstterm>, enabling you to specify the systems and
+      functions that you require.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-package-selection">
@@ -99,32 +93,31 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      Against each group is listed the number of packages within the
-      group that will be installed, and the total number of packages in
-      that group.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      The groups required for the installation type that you chose are
+      The default groups for the installation type that you chose are
       ticked. You can select or remove any group of packages at this
       point, including those for the installation type.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       No packages from a group will be installed unless the checkbox
-      next to the group is ticked. 
+      next to the group is ticked.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
+   <para>
     To change which packages within a selected group will be installed,
       click the <guilabel>Details</guilabel> link next to the name of
-      the group.  The <guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group will
-      automatically be installed if the group has been selected.
+      the group.  The <guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group are
+      automatically installed if the group is selected.
       <guilabel>Optional Packages</guilabel> can be selected or
       deselected by clicking the checkbox next to the name of the
       individual package.
     </para>
 
+    <para>
+      Listed against each group is the number of packages are currently
+      slected for installation, and the total number of packages within that group.
+    </para>
+
     <figure id="fig-package-selection-details">
       <title>Package Group Details Dialog</title>
       <mediaobject>
@@ -149,7 +142,7 @@
     <title>Selecting Support for Additional Languages</title>
 
     <para>
-      Your &FED; system will automatically support the language that you
+      Your &FED; system automatically supports the language that you
       selected at the start of the installation process.  To include
       support for additional languages, select the packages for those
       languages from the <guilabel>Language Support</guilabel> package
@@ -170,8 +163,8 @@
     <para>
       Two of the groups under the heading of
       <guilabel>Miscellaneous</guilabel> are not compatible with the
-      others.  For this reason, selecting either of these groups will
-      prevent you from using all of the other groups on the list.
+      others.  For this reason, selecting either of these groups
+      prevents you from using the other groups on the list.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -201,10 +194,9 @@
     <para>
       When you are satisfied with the packages selected for
       installation, click <guilabel>Next</guilabel>.  The installation
-      system will then check your selection and automatically resolve
-      inconsistencies by adding any other packages needed to support the
-      software that you have chosen. You will then move on to the next
-      screen.
+      system checks your selection, and automatically adds any extra
+      packages required for the software that you have selected, before
+      moving on to the next screen.
     </para>
 
   </sect1>