install-guide fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml,1.5,1.6

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4951

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml 
Log Message:
Fixed Upgrade chapter for better information flow


Index: fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	12 May 2005 22:27:31 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	13 May 2005 00:04:02 -0000	1.6
@@ -4,55 +4,58 @@
   <title>Upgrading an Existing System</title>
 
   <para>
-    The installation system will automatically detect any existing
-    installation of &FC;.  If there is a copy of &FC; then you will be
-    presented with this screen:
+    The installation system automatically detects any existing
+    installation of &FC;.  The upgrade process updates the existing &FC;
+    or &RHL; software with new versions.  The process does not remove
+    any data from users' home directories.  The existing partition
+    structure on your hard drives does not change.  Your system
+    configuration changes only if a package upgrade demands it.  Most
+    package upgrades do not change system configuration, but rather
+    install an additional configuration file for you to examine later.
   </para>
 
-  <figure id="fig-upgrade-examine">
-    <title>Upgrade Examine Screen</title>
-    <mediaobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.eps" format="EPS"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <textobject>
-        <para>
-	  Upgrade examine screen.
-        </para>
-      </textobject>
-    </mediaobject>
-  </figure>
-
-
-  <para>
-    To perform an upgrade of an existing system, select the appropriate
-    installation from the drop-down list and then select
-    <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.  
-  </para>
+  <section id="sn-upgrade-examine">
+    <title>Upgrade Examine</title>
 
-  <para>
-    The upgrade process updates the existing &FC; or &RHL; software with
-    new versions.  The process does not remove any data from users' home
-    directories.  The existing partition structure on your hard drives
-    does not change.  Your system configuration changes only if a
-    package upgrade demands it.  Most package upgrades do not change
-    system configuration, but rather install an additional configuration
-    file for you to examine later.
-  </para>
+    <para>
+      If your system contains a &FC; or &RHL; installation, the
+      following screen appears:
+    </para>
+
+    <figure id="fig-upgrade-examine">
+      <title>Upgrade Examine Screen</title>
+      <mediaobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.eps" format="EPS"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata fileref="./figs/upgrade-examine.png" format="PNG"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<textobject>
+	  <para>
+	    Upgrade examine screen.
+	  </para>
+	</textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
 
-  <note>
-    <title>Manually Installed Software</title>
     <para>
-      Software which you have installed manually on your existing &FC;
-      or &RHL; system may behave differently after an upgrade.  You may
-      manually recompile this software after an upgrade to ensure it
-      performs correctly on the updated system.
+      To perform an upgrade of an existing system, choose the
+      appropriate installation from the drop-down list and select
+      <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.  
     </para>
-  </note>
 
+    <note>
+      <title>Manually Installed Software</title>
+      <para>
+	Software which you have installed manually on your existing &FC;
+	or &RHL; system may behave differently after an upgrade.  You
+	may manually recompile this software after an upgrade to ensure
+	it performs correctly on the updated system.
+      </para>
+    </note>
+
+  </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Upgrading Boot Loader Configuration</title>
@@ -108,8 +111,7 @@
       installation system cannot update it.  In this case, select
       <guilabel>Skip boot loader updating</guilabel>.  When the
       installation process completes, refer to the documentation for
-      your product for help adding &FC; to your boot loader
-      configuration.
+      your product for assistance.
     </para>
 
     <para>